TPO52
The reading text and lecture are both about the asteroid colonization. While the writeer feel that, it will be easy to colonize the asteroid than other planet. at the same time lecturer dispute all these claims made by the author. His position is that, this is not a practical idea.
First of all, according to the reading text, asteroids having a low gravity than rest of the planet. It also suggests that, landing and take off on this asteroids is easier than the Moon and Mars. The lecturer challanged this view and states that, this low gravity will cause several health issue to the colonizer. Moreover, he argues that, those astronauts, who spend several month in low gravity will face the problem like reducing mucsle mass and lower down the bone density.
Secondly, reading suggests that, this asteroids will have many valuable minerals like gold and platinum. Author believes that, asteroid colonization is become more profitable and it will provide raw material for different products. However, professor contends that, cost of mining is major factor in this case. Because, due high availability of raw material and valuable mineral will decrease the demand of it and it will eventually does not support the mining cost of that mineral. Additionally, he said that in the end it will become non profitable business.
In the end, writer states that, this asteroids are some time nearer to the earth. it will easy to reach out to the asteroids. In contrast to that, tutor said that, asteroids are not a stationary object. It will continue revolve in their path. So, for the fraction of time it will nearer to the earth but after that, it will goes far away than the Mars and out Moon. On top of that, he notes down that, At that time it will become more difficult for us to return back to our mother earth.
- You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response Your response will be judged on the basis of the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and their relationship to the reading passage Typically an effect 3
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 161, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: At
...olonize the asteroid than other planet. at the same time lecturer dispute all thes...
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Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... suggests that, landing and take off on this asteroids is easier than the Moon and M...
^^^^
Line 3, column 277, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun health seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some health'.
Suggestion: some health
...tates that, this low gravity will cause several health issue to the colonizer. Moreover, he ar...
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Line 3, column 370, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun month seems to be countable; consider using: 'several months'.
Suggestion: several months
...rgues that, those astronauts, who spend several month in low gravity will face the problem li...
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Line 5, column 34, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ty. Secondly, reading suggests that, this asteroids will have many valuable miner...
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Line 5, column 434, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...the demand of it and it will eventually does not support the mining cost of that min...
^^^^
Line 7, column 33, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ess. In the end, writer states that, this asteroids are some time nearer to the e...
^^^^
Line 7, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...oids are some time nearer to the earth. it will easy to reach out to the asteroids...
^^
Line 7, column 325, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...er to the earth but after that, it will goes far away than the Mars and out Moon. On...
^^^^
Line 7, column 456, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...it will become more difficult for us to return back to our mother earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in contrast, first of all, in contrast to, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 22.412803532 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1373.03311258 110% => OK
No of words: 315.0 270.72406181 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7873015873 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38725937146 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 145.348785872 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526984126984 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 3.25607064018 430% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2376184027 49.2860985944 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3684210526 110.228320801 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5789473684 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 7.06452816374 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209807899124 0.272083759551 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815377775428 0.0996497079465 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686872924 0.0662205650399 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145312946818 0.162205337803 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181058566007 0.0443174109184 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.3589403974 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.2367328918 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 63.6247240618 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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