The author proposed a idea of colonization on Mars becuase of some reasons like it's low gravity and existance of valueable metals on it. However, the lecturer disagree with this idea of colonization by saying that it can be risky as well.
Firstly, the author suggest that transfer of equipments are quite easy because of low gravity, spaceship can easily make a landing without any gravitational force. The lecturer also mention that accessible but perilous also because of low gravity it can cause health hazards like muscle mass and bone density down as many astronomers already faces such kind of issues.
Second factor mentioned by author was the existance of valuable metals like gold and platinum which are seldom on earth mining. However, the professor claims that businessaly it's good for sponsoring them but excess avalablitiy of expensive metals may incerease prices for them. Also, transportation is high for extraction of metals.
Finally, the author present his idea by saying that due to slighter distance between orbits of Mars and Earth it's contented and affordable to get to and get back. The professor rebuts this argument by saying that distance between orbits is not certainly fixed so it's hard to return from Mars in two year trip.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
The author proposed a idea of colonization on Mars becuase of...
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Suggestion:
...nization on Mars becuase of some reasons like its low gravity and existance of va...
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Suggestion:
... of equipments are quite easy because of low gravity, spaceship can easily make a...
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...ention that accessible but perilous also because of low gravity it can cause heal...
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Line 4, column 304, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'trip' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'trips'.
Suggestion: trips
...ts hard to return from Mars in two year trip.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, may, second, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.4613686534 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 1373.03311258 77% => OK
No of words: 207.0 270.72406181 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08212560386 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62338857431 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 419.366225166 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0998753115 49.2860985944 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.888888889 110.228320801 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 21.698381199 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06452816374 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177343831231 0.272083759551 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721045496045 0.0996497079465 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0228919024671 0.0662205650399 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100992454026 0.162205337803 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320328095673 0.0443174109184 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.3589403974 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.42419426049 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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