All rules and regulation are designed in order to protect the lives of all individuals. Their guideline show a community member what is right to do and what extent. As times goes new rules are needed and old ones are changed in order to fit the present state of the society. To define a rule, it's a set of guidelines which has been established in all countries and has been accepted by all. Where some people think rules as a kind of restriction, it is my firm believes that may be rules bind a person into limits, but it still good for society and environment. Rules set by society for young people are good for them. However, in reality, life can’t be placed in order and modern civilization would definitely plunge itself into chaos in the absence of rules. I think this way for some reasons that rules are beneficial instead of restriction. I'll develop my opinion in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, a bundle of guideline in every field is used to represent the security purposes. As people becoming more advance and participate in the race of becoming best. In this way normally people become careless about themselves as well as for society. So rules are perfect boundaries for those people who can become a threat to other people. Like some people run their vehicles at high speed, so traffic rules are good barrier for those people, also smoking kills a person that is why doing smoking in private place is illegal, which is quite good for people. M y parents are restricted me to stay at home during night time during my younger age. That time I also used to thought that rules are just only restriction not any benefits. But as nowadays when I used to hear the news about kidnapping and rapes, then I came to know about the rules which helped me stayed safe during my youngers age. So may be rules are strict but they have also good impact on our lives.
Additionally, putting rules on something can balance the stuff. Even things become more interesting like we all used to watch sports in our daily life. A good sport is all based on rules. All the team members have to follow the instructions and rules and are judged on how they obey the rules. True enough, we all enjoy the game because everyone agree on what the rules are. Also school life is also a good example of rule and regulation. Without the rules students gonna do what they want to do in classroom. This can make a unpleasant environment. A classroom without rules can be a downright chaotic. Following all rules can make a person time punctual. Like my father always used to told me to wake up early in morning and sleep on time. This will give you a good habit. So following rules are good for life.
In conclusion, I retreat my opinion that may be sometime rules are hard to follow but result would be a positive impact without no any doubt. Also, it can make a person more successful in life. A person who follow all his rules and regulation, pay a good role in development of country. So again it is my believe that rules are not strict but it just have to put a person into good boundaries.
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...velopment of country. So again it is my believe that rules are not strict but it just h...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, then, well, as for, i think, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2528.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 562.0 407.700716846 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49822064057 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86893614481 4.48103885553 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45536644034 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475088967972 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 828.0 618.680645161 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 35.0 20.6003584229 170% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0274803563 48.9658058833 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.2285714286 100.406767564 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0571428571 20.6045352989 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.37142857143 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 22.0 11.8709677419 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19085823188 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0523309952361 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390377431706 0.0737576698707 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122708408696 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268445951494 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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