Amtrak is an intercity train service currently owned by the United States government There are a number of critics who believe that the government should not own Amtrak and that Amtrak should be sold to a privately owned company These critics put forward

The reading and listening are about the pros and cons of the using Amtrak train service in United state. The author present some arguments due to which Amtrak train should be sold to private owned company. The lecturer disagree with this and challenges each of the author's point.

Firstly the author suggested that Government loses its money on Amtrak because of less populated area, not enough passengers are using this service, which not even able to cover its maintenance cost. However, the professor claims that Amtrak is a non profitable service just to provide efficient transport service to people.

Additionally, the author notes that Amtrak government’s ownership become unfair to other private airline's transportation companies. But the professor rebuts this argument by saying that with else Amtrak government also pay for the air-traffic tower and weather department in order to provide help to private airline companies. Also, without government help private companies would not exist.

Finally, the author posits that government should spend its money on majority used transport instead of Amtrak train which is only used by less than 1 percent of people. The professor disagree with that and suggest that government should invest money on the improvement on Amtrak outdated service more people will prefer to use a fast service Amtrak train instead of their private vehicles.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 207, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...hould be sold to private owned company. The lecturer disagree with this and challen...
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Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'airlines'' or 'airline's'?
Suggestion: airlines'; airline's
...wnership become unfair to other private airlines transportation companies. But the profe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 219.0 270.72406181 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41095890411 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.04702891845 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59224834164 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 145.348785872 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561643835616 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 419.366225166 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0230718047 49.2860985944 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.5 110.228320801 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 7.06452816374 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341646253297 0.272083759551 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144975224082 0.0996497079465 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843120300194 0.0662205650399 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211595224566 0.162205337803 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657527366195 0.0443174109184 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.8541721854 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.0289183223 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.2367328918 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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