Traditional Yemeni Wedding

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Traditional Yemeni Wedding

Do you know how Yemeni people celebrate their weddings? All people around the world celebrate wedding parties in which they give the groom and the bride their best days during this party. In addition, they dress them delighting and beautiful clothes either traditional or modern. Each one of these people has his customs and traditions. For example, in Yemeni society, there are three main steps for a wedding celebration: engagement, wedding vows, and wedding party.

Initially, the female relatives of the young man go and visit the girl's house then they take a good look at her. After that, they get back to the man and describe her to him. Moreover, the man has the right to take a legitimate look at the girl. Eventually, if he agrees to marry her, they propose the girl to the young man. If the opposite happens, then everything goes back to its normal way.

The second step is the wedding vows in which the young man and the girl become legally a married couple. After the man pays the girl's dowry, they call a Sheikh to make the wedding vows; by giving some Islamic advice, motivations to young men to marry, and telling the young man and the girl's father or representative what to say.

The last and the longest step is the wedding party. We do a lot of things and have a lot of fun. For example, a few days before the wedding ceremony we send invitations to the people whom we know and have a friendly meeting. In the big day, we kindly welcome the guests, Besides, we prepare a big feast for them. In the afternoon, we go dancing in our traditional style like Zerbady dance and Pitaiq dance. Moreover, we make a night party in which we bring a singer, or make a comedian play. Sometimes we make a party before the wedding day we call it "Sharih".

In conclusion, styles of wedding ceremonies differ from one country to another and Yemeni weddings are full of religious antique traditions.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'girls'' or 'girl's'?
Suggestion: girls'; girl's
... married couple. After the man pays the girls dowry, they call a Sheikh to make the w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 7.30242825607 233% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 22.412803532 147% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1373.03311258 115% => OK
No of words: 341.0 270.72406181 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63636363636 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5552671117 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 145.348785872 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530791788856 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 487.8 419.366225166 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.8877732336 49.2860985944 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.05 110.228320801 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.05 21.698381199 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06452816374 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 4.33554083885 346% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273600937224 0.272083759551 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796271641151 0.0996497079465 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0998642257957 0.0662205650399 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165943654294 0.162205337803 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134241745203 0.0443174109184 303% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.8541721854 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.2367328918 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 8.42419426049 84% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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