There is a strange phenomena taking place in the luna called TLP. The passage describe there theories that can explain why the TLP generated, but none of them can explain it well.
The first theory is that the TLP is not really happened, and it is because of the error caused by observation. However, it can not explain why the TLP usually happen in two specifically location. If it is an error of observation, it should just happened in random area in the lunar. In fact, there is no reporing about the random happening in the moon.
The second theroy is that TLP is generated by the meteor impact, which can cause explosion and flash of light to be observed. Yet, it can not generate the light so long. A meteor impaction can cause light that only last for one second, but the TLP can lasts up to 20 miniutes. If it is generated by the impaction, there should be a meteor shower. The fact is there is no report about any meteor shower in the lunar surface.
The third theoty is that the rocks emit their own light, causing such flash. And yet, it should not be so strong. The moon shine just because it reflect the sunshine because the sunshine is brighter than the rock's light. The rock's light is like the candle that be focused by a spotlight when it compared with the sunshine.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and flash of light to be observed. Yet, it can not generate the light so long. A...
^^
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'last'
Suggestion: last
...ly last for one second, but the TLP can lasts up to 20 miniutes. If it is generated b...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'shines'.
Suggestion: shines
...t, it should not be so strong. The moon shine just because it reflect the sunshine be...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reflects'?
Suggestion: reflects
... strong. The moon shine just because it reflect the sunshine because the sunshine is br...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, second, so, third, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 1373.03311258 77% => OK
No of words: 237.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45147679325 5.08290768461 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32662069208 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506329113924 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 317.7 419.366225166 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.55342163355 84% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8992637107 49.2860985944 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.3333333333 110.228320801 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 21.698381199 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06452816374 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0569377877168 0.272083759551 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0229768074438 0.0996497079465 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460730272728 0.0662205650399 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0352823135152 0.162205337803 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232127371874 0.0443174109184 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.3589403974 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 53.8541721854 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.0289183223 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 12.2367328918 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and flash of light to be observed. Yet, it can not generate the light so long. A...
^^
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'last'
Suggestion: last
...ly last for one second, but the TLP can lasts up to 20 miniutes. If it is generated b...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 124, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'shines'.
Suggestion: shines
...t, it should not be so strong. The moon shine just because it reflect the sunshine be...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 146, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reflects'?
Suggestion: reflects
... strong. The moon shine just because it reflect the sunshine because the sunshine is br...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, second, so, third, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 10.4613686534 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 1373.03311258 77% => OK
No of words: 237.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45147679325 5.08290768461 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32662069208 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 145.348785872 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506329113924 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 317.7 419.366225166 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.55342163355 84% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.8992637107 49.2860985944 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.3333333333 110.228320801 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 21.698381199 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06452816374 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0569377877168 0.272083759551 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0229768074438 0.0996497079465 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460730272728 0.0662205650399 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0352823135152 0.162205337803 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232127371874 0.0443174109184 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 13.3589403974 55% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 53.8541721854 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.0289183223 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 12.2367328918 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.42419426049 88% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 63.6247240618 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.