Undoubtedly, technology has changed our lives in several ways. One of the most important advances has been in terms of communication. Currently, people have the facility to be aware of what is happening worldwide. Therefore, I personally believe that is important to be well-informed about events around the world although they do not affect our lives. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, one of the great advance in technology has been the television which provides people with information in every part of the world. Besides, according to several studies people spend around three or four hours per day watching TV. By doing this, people cannot only acquire new information but also learn which most of the time are the topic of conversation among people. But when there is no efficient use of television people can also be misinformed. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Two months ago, I had a meeting with my friends from high school when the main topic of the conversation was political problems in the United States. Because I had not been watching television for many months, I did not have information for involved in the discussion which made me feel uncomfortable. However, this reality changed when I started to use not specific TV but the internet for being aware of relevant events. Having incorporated this activity in my schedule, I acquired new information and when my ex-classmates organized another meeting I was able to contribute with information in the discussion.
Secondly, another benefit from being aware of the situation in our surroundings is that it provides people with some necessary strategies for overcoming any sudden incident. When people are informed about climatic changes and their effect, it helps them to be alert in case of an emergency. For instance, two years ago the worst catastrophe happened to my country, an earthquake which not only destroyed the building but also several families. This incident became worse because people did not know how to react to these types of situations. But if people had been well-informed about mechanisms to react and reduce consequences in those cases, the effects would have been obviously less. This type of information that people need is to transmit by a program of television. Therefore, we can conclude that being informed may help citizens prevent certain disasters caused by unexpected situations.
In conclusion, for all the reasons that I mentioned above, I strongly consider that people should spend a little of their time watching TV but in productive programs which implies a proper use of it.
Undoubtedly, technology has changed our lives in several ways. One of the most important advances has been in terms of communication. Currently, people have the facility to be aware of what is happening worldwide. Therefore, I personally believe that is important to be well-informed about events around the world although they do not affect our lives. I feel this way for two main reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
First of all, one of the great advance in technology has been the television which provides people with information in every part of the world. Besides, according to several studies people spend around three or four hours per day watching TV. By doing this, people cannot only acquire new information but also learn which most of the time are the topic of conversation among people. But when there is no efficient use of television people can also be misinformed. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Two months ago, I had a meeting with my friends from high school when the main topic of the conversation was political problems in the United States. Because I had not been watching television for many months, I did not have information for involved in the discussion which made me feel uncomfortable. However, this reality changed when I started to use not specific TV but the internet for being aware of relevant events. Having incorporated this activity in my schedule, I acquired new information and when my ex-classmates organized another meeting I was able to contribute with information in the discussion.
Secondly, another benefit from being aware of the situation in our surroundings is that it provides people with some necessary strategies for overcoming any sudden incident. When people are informed about climatic changes and their effect, it helps them to be alert in case of an emergency. For instance, two years ago the worst catastrophe happened to my country, an earthquake which not only destroyed the building but also several families. This incident became worse because people did not know how to react to these types of situations. But if people had been well-informed about mechanisms to react and reduce consequences in those cases, the effects would have been obviously less. This type of information that people need is to transmit by a program of television. Therefore, we can conclude that being informed may help citizens prevent certain disasters caused by unexpected situations.
In conclusion, for all the reasons that I mentioned above, I strongly consider that people should spend a little of their time watching TV but in productive programs which implies a proper use of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.4613686534 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 22.412803532 192% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 30.3222958057 198% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.01324503311 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2230.0 1373.03311258 162% => OK
No of words: 439.0 270.72406181 162% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07972665148 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.04702891845 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90210017729 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 145.348785872 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533029612756 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 701.1 419.366225166 167% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 3.25607064018 369% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6911619539 49.2860985944 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.363636364 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9545454545 21.698381199 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.04545454545 7.06452816374 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321666909143 0.272083759551 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106989652348 0.0996497079465 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130777707662 0.0662205650399 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233431405086 0.162205337803 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.236638948723 0.0443174109184 534% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 63.6247240618 170% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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