We have observed a gradual increase of the sea level during the last decades. It is a slow increase, and despite the alarmist attitudes of some, it is nothing to be worried about. By analyzing the data and looking into the matter clearly, we can find that this is a normal process that has happened before.
Even though we have documented a rise in the polar ice melting, this isn't the reason for the increase in the sea level. That ice is already in the water, so it displaces it already. Think of ice cubes in your glass of water, when they melt it doesn't make the water from the glass spill over. The same thing happens when the ice cap melts. Since the Ice is 90% already in water, when it goes into a liquid state, nothing drastic happens.
When it comes to the source for the increase in the sea level, we just don't know where it comes from. Many scientific agencies like NASA have stated that they simply don't know from where all this new water is coming. So it is still a great unknown
The sea level has been fluctuating ever since the continents have emerged from the primordial ocean. We have seen many changes through the eons, half of our current landmass was submerged at one point. The same will probably happen later, and it will be through a slow and gradual process. Enough time will pass for humanity to adjust
The reading passage explains about the issue of the rise of the sea level. The passage describes that this issue is not concerning and is very much normal. However the professor contradicts the reading passage saying that the issue is alarming and need immediate attention.
Firstly, it is explained in the reading passage, that the polar ice are melting and there is no effect of such melting in the rise of sea level as such melted ice were already part of the sea. However, the lecturer provide example of the permafrost, which is the ice located in the land. The rapid melting of this ice due to various human activities resulted in the increase in the sea level. She provides name of the island like Greenland, Siberia where, such permafrost are located. Melting of such ice, results in the extreme mount of the sea level.
Next, it is mentioned in the reading that NASA has no any scientific reasoning regarding the accumulation of the new water that supports the of augmentation of sea level. However, the lecturer mentions that many scientific research and NASA has proven connection between the ocean swallowing the land part and adding it to the water portion resulting in the alarming rise of water level. Also, it is claimed that the current study found melting of permafrost, due to the green house effect caused by the burning of the fossil fuel, as the reason behind augmentation of the water level.
The author of the paragraph acclaimed that the fluctuation of water level is nothing new and has happened from the beginning, since emergence of the primordial ocean. Hence, no impact could be seen on the land and people residing on them. However, the lecturer contradicts this statement saying that the global warming has resulted in alarming rise of the temperature. As a result, the permafrost are melting excessively in short period. If this continues, then within short time, 20% of the landmass will dissolve beneath the water level. So, the lecturer suggests to act fast and act now to stop the alarming effect of rise in water level as there is less time to adjust for the humankind.
In this way, the reading and the lecture contradict each other’s opinion.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
.... The passage describes that this issue is not concerning and is very much normal. However the pr...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...not concerning and is very much normal. However the professor contradicts the reading p...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd there is no effect of such melting in the rise of sea level as such melted ice...
^^
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... mentioned in the reading that NASA has no any scientific reasoning regarding the ...
^^
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[4]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much scientific research', 'a good deal of scientific research'.
Suggestion: much scientific research; a good deal of scientific research
...l. However, the lecturer mentions that many scientific research and NASA has proven connection between ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 558, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggests acting'.
Suggestion: suggests acting
...neath the water level. So, the lecturer suggests to act fast and act now to stop the alarming e...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, regarding, so, then, in short, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 30.3222958057 178% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1373.03311258 132% => OK
No of words: 374.0 270.72406181 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85828877005 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55442768611 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465240641711 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 419.366225166 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2638069544 49.2860985944 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.944444444 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06452816374 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101508904015 0.272083759551 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379100448113 0.0996497079465 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366208481815 0.0662205650399 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0550202093793 0.162205337803 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180354866571 0.0443174109184 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.3589403974 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 63.6247240618 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 114, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
.... The passage describes that this issue is not concerning and is very much normal. However the pr...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 157, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...not concerning and is very much normal. However the professor contradicts the reading p...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 122, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd there is no effect of such melting in the rise of sea level as such melted ice...
^^
Line 3, column 52, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
... mentioned in the reading that NASA has no any scientific reasoning regarding the ...
^^
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[4]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun research seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much scientific research', 'a good deal of scientific research'.
Suggestion: much scientific research; a good deal of scientific research
...l. However, the lecturer mentions that many scientific research and NASA has proven connection between ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 558, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggests acting'.
Suggestion: suggests acting
...neath the water level. So, the lecturer suggests to act fast and act now to stop the alarming e...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, however, if, regarding, so, then, in short, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 30.3222958057 178% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1817.0 1373.03311258 132% => OK
No of words: 374.0 270.72406181 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85828877005 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55442768611 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.465240641711 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 419.366225166 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2638069544 49.2860985944 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.944444444 110.228320801 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 7.06452816374 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101508904015 0.272083759551 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379100448113 0.0996497079465 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366208481815 0.0662205650399 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0550202093793 0.162205337803 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180354866571 0.0443174109184 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.3589403974 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 63.6247240618 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.