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employment rate in the UK
The line graph compares how many people are employed in three different sectors of economics in the UK over a decade between 2000 and 2010.
Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there were upward trends in the number of people who are employed in both public and self-employed sector while privet sector witnessed significant fall by the end of the tenfold.
As regards public sector, having leveled of employment number under 40 until 2002, it went up considerably to nearly 50 in 2005. Followed by slight dib to about 45in 2006, there was a gradual rise in the number of emplo...
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privet sector witnessed significant fall
privet sector witnessed a significant fall
Sentence: Followed by slight dib to about 45in 2006, there was a gradual rise in the number of employees to over 50 in 2010.
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