The maps below shows the changes in America between 1948 and 2010
The maps depict in terms of the changing an American town between 1948 and 2000 over a-52 year period. The most noticeable change is the replacement of many building areas with several commercial buildings and transportation.
Looking at the details, there was several conversion of variability. In the east side of the area, several factories have been taken over an airport near with street on the right side. Moreover, in the right of it, some supermarkets have been built which was opposite with petrol station. At the same time, residential houses have been destroyed and replaced by several hypermarkets. Regarding in the west side, church has been demolish and it have been eradicated by a sport stadium to the left of canal. In 1998, it built a huge supermarket, but it also taken over by two commercial building.
By contrast, residential homes in the south area and petrol station on the north side build which was not changing until in 2010. Overall, the building build in significant changes and the variation manifest that the city develop gradually in terms of everything during the interval.
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the changing an American town
the changing of an American town
there was several conversion of variability.
there were several conversions of variability.
Moreover, in the right of it, some supermarkets have been built which was opposite with petrol station.
Description: can you re-write this sentence?
church has been demolish and it have been eradicated
a church has been demolished and it has been eradicated
but it also taken over by
but it is also taken over by
residential homes in the south area and petrol station on the north side build which was not changing until in 2010
Description: what is the verb for this sentence? can you re-write this sentence?
the city develop gradually
the city develops gradually
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