Deciding on job, the salary is the most important consideration. What extent do you agree or disagree?
In this materialistic society, more and more people are looking for a job with high salary, but others think that improving skills is more important for doing a job. Indeed, there is no doubt that the salary is also important. There are so many things making most people admit that the salary is the most important in choosing a job.
First, a large majority of workers are focusing on earning fortunes in order to cover the needs and provide them with security, such as places to live, food, education. These cause more and more people are seeking the fortunes, such as Indonesia, Indonesian people tend to decide a job with good salary because of the demand of life, in addition, all things are more and more expensive.
Besides all things are getting more and more expensive, the economy of Indonesia is going down, this causes not only is living cost more and more expensive but also the expense of education and services in Indonesia become very expensive. Moreover, the development of Indonesia is increasing very slowly, as a result, the government can not give people subsidization. Consequently, Indonesians are more difficult to fulfill the necessities.
I personally agree that looking for a high-salary job is the most important thing of all things regarding a job such as improving skills, making good relations among workers. Because of this expensive era, most people are trying to cover both their needs and their unexpected financial difficulties, so that the salary of a job becomes an important consideration.
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the salary is the most important in choosing a job.
the salary is the most important thing in choosing a job.
this causes not only is living cost more and more expensive but also the expense of education
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Sentence: Moreover, the development of Indonesia is increasing very slowly, as a result, the government can not give people subsidization.
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Suggestion: Refer to people and subsidization
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