You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with the accommodation.
Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter:
Say what the problem is.
Describe the accommodation you thought you were getting.
Ask the provider to solve the problem.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am a student who is living in Hotel QMC, which is located in front of your office, and I am writing to you to complain about a serious problem in my room. There was an agreement between us for you to prepare a single room in a quiet area. However, I discovered that it is a double room in addition to it being in a very busy hotel, which is located next to a noisy road.
Because I came in order to study an important course, I asked you to reserve a single room to be able to study without being interrupted by someone else. Moreover, I thought the room would be in a quiet hotel and in a peaceful area, but it has not happened.
Therefore, I would be grateful if you are able to change my current room with another one in a quieter place. Furthermore, it should be a single room as agreed before.
I am looking forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Yours faithfully,
Adam Kabeer
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 177 200
No. of Characters: 710 1000
No. of Different Words: 103 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.647 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.011 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.351 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 46 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 33 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 13 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 7 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.7 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.829 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.393 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.783 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.186 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4