The charts below show the level of participation in education and science in developing and industrialized countries in 1980 and 1990.
These charts shown below illustrated the level of participation in education and science in order to improve the developing and industrialized countries during 1980-1990.
The first chart describes the average years of schooling, while the years of schooling drawn as vertical axis and the years component with horizontal axis, as similar through the following graphs. During 1980 and 1990, the Industrialized countries gained increasing from approximately 8 years towards 10, while the developing countries raised up from around 2 years until below 4 years.
The following chart shows the scientist and technicians per 1000 people which both of those countries rates grew up from below 20 rate for the developing countries and the industrialized countries escalated from 40 to around 60 rate.
The last chart illustrates the spending on research and development by US$ billions number as the factor that will influence among two years. By the developing countries decreased from 1980 to 1990 while another hand raised up dramatically from around 100$ until approximately 300$ over.
To conclude, those three charts define that developing countries had lower rate definitely than Industrialized countries in education and science matters.
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while the years of schooling drawn as vertical axis
while the years of schooling are drawn as vertical axis
Sentence: The following chart shows the scientist and technicians per 1000 people which both of those countries rates grew up from below 20 rate for the developing countries and the industrialized countries escalated from 40 to around 60 rate.
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By the developing countries decreased from 1980 to 1990
the developing countries decreased from 1980 to 1990
Sentence: The last chart illustrates the spending on research and development by US billions number as the factor that will influence among two years.
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