"The powerful are most respected not when they exercise their power but when they refrain from exercising it"
Write an essay in which you develop and support a position on the statement above. In writing your essay, you should consider both when the statement may be true and when it may be false.
Power can be defined in many ways : it could be the power to proselytize , power to voice out one's thoughts or it could also mean the freedom and privilege one enjoys due to the position status or ranking.Often people might argue that it is a good thing to use the power one has.This is true if it is for the advantage of all and not for greed or to disdain others. However it is seen that respect and support is drawn more when people refrain from exercising the power though they have it ;this proves their honesty and candidness towards their position of holding power. Therefore people mostly respect those in power who refrain from than to exercise it.
As we look back into the Indian history of the freedom struggle , Bhagath singh is a popular name which everybody remembers for his shrewdness , valor,enthusiasm and strength. He was a very powerful leader. People respected him for his patriotism and the determination he had towards freeing India, people respected him for his enthusiasm and audacity he showed in his actions by bombarding the parliament to evoke fear in the Britishers. He had the power of intelligence to incite jingoism among people to fight against the slavery and stand upfront for their rights with courage. He was respected more because he had the knack to put his power to use and for the benefit of people, though he followed "violence".
In contrary , we have seen how Gandhiji, one of India's most efficient , amiable and respected freedom fighter, followed "Ahimsa" -non violence and "sathyagraha"-honesty. He was indeed powerful ; people respected him to the core and were effusively ready to support him and follow his actions. Though he had all the power in form of support and respect, he still followed very subtle ways of freedom fight. He had all the comforts but he refrained to use them and be austere. He could have initiated a violent attack or a formal war with the power bestowed in him, but he decided to refrain from it and follow a non violent method , teaching people to refrain from exercising power on to others , whether they are stronger or weaker .He refrained from every advantage he could take and followed the path of candidness.
Similarly, we come across many such incidents in our daily life where a murder convict is a direct relative of a powerful politician or a wealthy business tycoon who hold a great power of their position, for whom it is easy to make the convict escape the charges with all the powerful influence they exercise to exonerate .This is highly despised by all. But there are many honest people holding a powerful position in means of rank ,wealth status or designation who refrain from using these powers of their position and still adhere to the law to bring justice and redress the wrong. Such people are respected more for their honesty and strength to refrain from exercising the power to their advantage.
ultimately, it is clear that people support those who refrain from exercising power but on the contrary it is also true that people support those who use their power for the right things and for the betterment of the people and nation and not merely for one's own use ; to enjoy the power they have , or to show superiority over others who are not powerful.Hence power is respected when exercised for the betterment and also when refrained for the betterment.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'similarly', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'on the contrary']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.23064516129 0.240241500013 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.175806451613 0.157235817809 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0612903225806 0.0880659088768 70% => OK
Adverbs: 0.041935483871 0.0497285424764 84% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0870967741935 0.0444667217837 196% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.111290322581 0.12292977631 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0354838709677 0.0406280797675 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63661269726 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0403225806452 0.030933414821 130% => OK
Particles: 0.00161290322581 0.0016655270985 97% => OK
Determiners: 0.0854838709677 0.0997080785238 86% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00967741935484 0.0249443105267 39% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0209677419355 0.0148568991511 141% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3362.0 2732.02544248 123% => OK
No of words: 590.0 452.878318584 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.69830508475 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.92848004997 4.58838876751 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.332203389831 0.366273622748 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.242372881356 0.280924506359 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.154237288136 0.200843997647 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0932203389831 0.132149295362 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63661269726 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 219.290929204 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.428813559322 0.48968727796 88% => OK
Word variations: 51.1979631521 55.4138127331 92% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6194690265 82% => OK
Sentence length: 34.7058823529 23.380412469 148% => OK
Sentence length SD: 116.217848179 59.4972553346 195% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 197.764705882 141.124799967 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.7058823529 23.380412469 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.705882352941 0.674092028746 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.21349557522 460% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 58.9431704885 51.4728631049 115% => OK
Elegance: 1.2380952381 1.64882698954 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316892195958 0.391690518653 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.161980654331 0.123202303941 131% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0934844156532 0.077325440228 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.618982529682 0.547984918172 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.185473437979 0.149214159877 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146082430327 0.161403998019 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0631539389804 0.0892212321368 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.417673872301 0.385218514788 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0845948435484 0.0692045440612 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234527390083 0.275328986314 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415467308516 0.0653680567796 64% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 10.4325221239 144% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88274336283 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 14.0 7.22455752212 194% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 16.0 13.5995575221 118% => OK
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations to cover all aspects.