People are never satisfied with what they have, they always want something more or something different. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
Now a days due to globalisation world changed a lot. People are getting closer using technology still they are not satisfied with what they have.From decade to decade we are improving ourselves more and more but we are not satisfied we want something more.
In society people are not satisfied with one home and one car.For example if they have small car they will dream for big car n big bungalow.In that case for making houses people are cutting trees, indirectly it is affecting to enviorment. Hence to prove the statement best example is temprature increased in worldwide by two degree celcious.
In my opinion dream should not have limit but if these are not affecting to. By keeping this thing in mind we should grow up and stay happy with what we have.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
Now a days due to globalisation world changed a lo...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: From
...y are not satisfied with what they have.From decade to decade we are improving ourse...
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Suggestion: For
...not satisfied with one home and one car.For example if they have small car they wil...
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Suggestion: In
...y will dream for big car n big bungalow.In that case for making houses people are ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...directly it is affecting to enviorment. Hence to prove the statement best example is ...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'statement the best'.
Suggestion: statement the best
...cting to enviorment. Hence to prove the statement best example is temprature increased in worl...
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Line 5, column 37, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'limited'.
Suggestion: limited
... In my opinion dream should not have limit but if these are not affecting to. By k...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'for example', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.219858156028 0.229887763892 96% => OK
Verbs: 0.234042553191 0.158761421928 147% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0709219858156 0.0866891130778 82% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0709219858156 0.046263068375 153% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0851063829787 0.0685040099705 124% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0921985815603 0.118717715034 78% => OK
Participles: 0.0851063829787 0.0351676179071 242% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.50701843968 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0354609929078 0.0309702414327 115% => OK
Particles: 0.00709219858156 0.00188951952338 375% => OK
Determiners: 0.0354609929078 0.0887237588012 40% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0212765957447 0.0209618222197 102% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0212765957447 0.0139019557991 153% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 763.0 2387.08602151 32% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 134.0 408.028673835 33% => More words wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69402985075 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.40232815919 4.48200974243 76% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.298507462687 0.338922669872 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.208955223881 0.251872472559 83% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.141791044776 0.174417080927 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.141791044776 0.112833075102 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50701843968 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 212.727598566 40% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.524397521467 122% => OK
Word variations: 56.5042784743 59.2087087015 95% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6684587814 29% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 22.3333333333 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.5788920738 48.84282405 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.166666667 120.699889404 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.5533526081 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.16666666667 0.644075263715 181% => Less Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.5376344086 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 43.2288557214 45.7405998639 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.01818181818 1.45489161554 70% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291269185228 0.300154397459 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0980682525113 0.103427244359 95% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.073519032679 0.0752933317313 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.629461026382 0.497263757937 127% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.225328334539 0.151897553556 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122632545487 0.114077575197 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11512710222 0.0781384742642 147% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.189911458771 0.336927656856 56% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.00899573886163 0.067059652881 13% => Paragraphs are so close to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199463884749 0.210909579961 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10574500967 0.0618886996521 171% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 11.8870967742 25% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.86379928315 52% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 1.0 8.42114695341 12% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 3.0 13.6433691756 22% => More topic words wanted.
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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