People do many different things to stay healthy. what do you do for a good health?
Without any shadow of doubt, health is the greatest wealth in every person's life. From beginning the formatting of first civilization, both general public to intellectuals have been seeking healthy situations. With this in mind, every person is inclined to various selections of healthy ways according to his or her age, ability, and conditions medically acceptable for the health. As far as I am concerned, the healthy conditions should be considered as important engagement of people. There exist different ways to possess the healthy life, some of which are elaborated upon in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, one of the effective ways of healthy life is exercise, which plays a significant role in everyone's life in bringing a proper health condition. Through doing exercise, people can fortify their mind and control the daily stress. According to the US department of health and services, stress is key factor in increasing the diseases. blood pressure, and acne, to name but a few, which affects various facets of the life, while doing regular exercise in the morning prevents these neural pressures. In addition, people can reach to the suitable physical conditions so that can bring valuable benefits against difficult environmental situations. Therefore, the exercise has a great contribution for people in leading them to the healthy life.
Second, living in healthy environment is effective in achieving a life with high standards. In this regard, mankind in the today's world due to high exploitation of environment, has adversely affected his or her surrounding and expose the most people under environmental contaminations and pollutions. Moreover, the psychological stats approve the fact that those of people who have strong family ties and enjoy the proper social relations enjoy immune systems and live longer in compared to the persons who suffer from the environmental problems.
Last but not least, enjoying healthy and proper diet is another vital factor in order to possess the best wholesome condition in the life. Accordingly, eating nutrient materials such as vegetables, fruits, milk, and fish enhances the brain ability so that a person can make logical decisions for the future schedules. In contrast, using junk foods not only have no nutrients, but also causes dangerous diseases in the people. Therefore, having nutrient diet can lead a person toward the development and progress future through making proper and intellectual decisions.
To sum up, both humans and governments pay to the fact that achieving brilliant and developed conditions are affected from healthy mind and body physics so that with wrong healthy planning, any society encounters with irreplaceable and detrimental problems. Therefore, doing exercise, enjoying suitable environment, and having decent diet are some great plans to get healthy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... health is the greatest wealth in every persons life. From beginning the formatting of ...
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Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
... formatting of first civilization, both general public to intellectuals have been seeking heal...
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Line 3, column 352, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Blood
... key factor in increasing the diseases. blood pressure, and acne, to name but a few, ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'moreover', 'second', 'so', 'therefore', 'while', 'in addition', 'in contrast', 'such as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.256513026052 0.229887763892 112% => OK
Verbs: 0.130260521042 0.158761421928 82% => OK
Adjectives: 0.140280561122 0.0866891130778 162% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0340681362725 0.046263068375 74% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0140280561122 0.0685040099705 20% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.112224448898 0.118717715034 95% => OK
Participles: 0.0541082164329 0.0351676179071 154% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.90563970203 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0280561122244 0.0309702414327 91% => OK
Particles: 0.00200400801603 0.00188951952338 106% => OK
Determiners: 0.102204408818 0.0887237588012 115% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0120240480962 0.0209618222197 57% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0100200400802 0.0139019557991 72% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2874.0 2387.08602151 120% => OK
No of words: 445.0 408.028673835 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.45842696629 5.86048508987 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48200974243 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.43595505618 0.338922669872 129% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.334831460674 0.251872472559 133% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.23595505618 0.174417080927 135% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.186516853933 0.112833075102 165% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90563970203 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54606741573 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 64.4649749827 59.2087087015 109% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 22.25 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2069862926 48.84282405 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.7 120.699889404 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.5533526081 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.644075263715 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 55.7331460674 45.7405998639 122% => OK
Elegance: 2.37078651685 1.45489161554 163% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0954078089968 0.300154397459 32% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0848354465209 0.103427244359 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0529408811068 0.0752933317313 70% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.55580554297 0.497263757937 112% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1183931274 0.151897553556 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472463082425 0.114077575197 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0285091106392 0.0781384742642 36% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.389051279669 0.336927656856 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.105748428086 0.067059652881 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711618192723 0.210909579961 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291090598809 0.0618886996521 47% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8870967742 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 16.0 13.6433691756 117% => OK
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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