What most human beings really want to attain is not knowledge, but certainty. Gaining real knowledge requires taking risks and keeping the mind open—but most people prefer to be reassured rather than to learn the complex and often unsettling truth about anything." Present your perspective on the issue, using relevant reasons and/or examples
to support your views.
Knowledge is what opens the door to a completely different dimension. Knowledge helps people to achieve what they truly desire to be in the coming future. A person might want to increase the knowledge in a particular domain he can carry on his research or may desire to work at a higher rank at a company. The goal is what can be achieved through knowledge. The statement about getting certainty through knowledge is plausible but without knowledge how can certainty be achieved? When a person studies he will no doubt gain knowledge and let’s say finally gets a job, his risk-taking and keeping an open mind has just started. Without proper knowledge a person can possibly succeed in the future, therefore there is no certainty without knowledge. Once a person gets the idea of the world he or she will definitely turn toward their actual field of study they duly like which will push forward their learning process a step ahead.
First of all, if people do not want to attain knowledge they can possibly reach certainty. In order to have certainty, knowledge is a mandatory requirement worldwide. Different people have different view of their goals, for some it can be studying and learning about a particular field till he achieves the acme of that study and for some goal can be to get a plum paid job, for some it can be to become a celebrity and some may desire to work for the society. Therefore within this wide range of expectation, one thing that is common is knowledge. To be successful in any field people need knowledge and a lot of it. In other words, knowledge does not stick to studies only, knowledge pervade among various field, knowledge is indescribable, knowledge ranges from arts to science, astronomy to sports, singing, dancing, diplomacy, politics, management, skill development, social works etc.
When a person gets involved in a particular field he will no doubt gain knowledge. Once a person gets into a job he has to utilize his knowledge, he has to keep an open mind and even take risks to get the assigned job done. Conversely, the person without proper knowledge will not be able to do so and hence will find it difficult to stay put at his position. The process of to get the job done the knowledge that the person has acquired earlier get buttressed and the process gets converted to learning. So learning is never ending, it does not get stagnated.
There are numerous paths to achieve what one desire the most, and the world provides it. After a person know about his desires he is free to choose and even to change the field of study that he desires. This will make the learning process more enjoyable.
In a nutshell, people who acquire knowledge can only be successful in the future and hence can achieve certainty. Knowledge has many forms and fields, but one must perfect in at least one, to acquire certainty. Once a person gets to do what he likes, it will enhance the knowledge acquired through the process of learning. Therefore certainty can only be achievable through knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 662, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
...rted. Without proper knowledge a person can possibly succeed in the future, therefore there ...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: MAY_COULD_POSSIBLY[1]
Message: Use simply 'can'.
Suggestion: can
...le do not want to attain knowledge they can possibly reach certainty. In order to have certa...
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Line 3, column 462, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ome may desire to work for the society. Therefore within this wide range of expectation, ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...skill development, social works etc. When a person gets involved in a particular ...
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Line 5, column 189, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'risks getting'.
Suggestion: risks getting
... has to keep an open mind and even take risks to get the assigned job done. Conversely, the ...
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Line 8, column 325, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...quired through the process of learning. Therefore certainty can only be achievable throug...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'conversely', 'finally', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'as to', 'at least', 'no doubt', 'first of all', 'in other words']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.212068965517 0.240241500013 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.198275862069 0.157235817809 126% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0603448275862 0.0880659088768 69% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0534482758621 0.0497285424764 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.05 0.0444667217837 112% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0896551724138 0.12292977631 73% => OK
Participles: 0.0344827586207 0.0406280797675 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.63798885475 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0448275862069 0.030933414821 145% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.098275862069 0.0997080785238 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0396551724138 0.0249443105267 159% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0189655172414 0.0148568991511 128% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3039.0 2732.02544248 111% => OK
No of words: 527.0 452.878318584 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.76660341556 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.332068311195 0.366273622748 91% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.256166982922 0.280924506359 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.184060721063 0.200843997647 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138519924099 0.132149295362 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63798885475 2.79330140395 94% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 219.290929204 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.432637571157 0.48968727796 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 49.9470874256 55.4138127331 90% => OK
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6194690265 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.2692307692 23.380412469 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.8519479299 59.4972553346 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.884615385 141.124799967 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2692307692 23.380412469 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.538461538462 0.674092028746 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.21349557522 115% => OK
Readability: 45.8859290615 51.4728631049 89% => OK
Elegance: 1.11428571429 1.64882698954 68% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434475517272 0.391690518653 111% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100413443751 0.123202303941 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0813394916238 0.077325440228 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.49110748071 0.547984918172 90% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119893346732 0.149214159877 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165536141051 0.161403998019 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067641965377 0.0892212321368 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.378594795891 0.385218514788 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0800657931187 0.0692045440612 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301156642062 0.275328986314 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327434977597 0.0653680567796 50% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.4325221239 153% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88274336283 123% => OK
Positive topic words: 16.0 7.22455752212 221% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.70907079646 185% => OK
Total topic words: 25.0 13.5995575221 184% => OK
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations to cover all aspects.