We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in
businesses, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things
will they be used for in the future? Is this dependence on computers a
good thing or should we he more auspicious of their benefits?
Computers are a relatively new invention. The first computers were built fifty years
ago and it is only in the last thirty or so years that their influence has affected our
everyday life. Personal computers were introduced as recently as the early
eighties. In this short time they have made a tremendous impact on our lives. We
are now so dependent on computers that it is hard to imagine what things would
be like today without them. You have only got to go into a bank when their main
computer is broken to appreciate the chaos that would occur if computers were
suddenly removed worldwide.
In the future computers will be used to create bigger and even more sophisticated
computers. The prospects for this are quite alarming. They will be so complex that
no individual could hope to understand how they work. They will bring a lot of
benefits but they will also increase the potential for unimaginable chaos. They will,
for example, be able to fly planes and they will be able to co ordinate the
movements of several planes in the vicinity of an airport. Providing all the
computers are working correctly nothing can go wrong. If one small program fails
— disaster.
There is a certain inevitability that technology will progress and become
increasingly complex. We should, however, ensure that we are still in a position
where we are able to control technology. It will be all too easy to suddenly
discover that technology is controlling us. By then it might be too late I believe
that it is very important to be suspicious of the benefits that computers will bring
and to make sure that we never become totally dependent on a completely
technological world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'invention'.
Suggestion: invention
Computers are a relatively new invention. The first computers were built fifty y...
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Line 12, column 76, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e the potential for unimaginable chaos. They will, for example, be able to fly plan...
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Line 15, column 55, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...working correctly nothing can go wrong. If one small program fails — disaster. T...
^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.154838709677 0.247107183377 63% => OK
Verbs: 0.2 0.155533422707 129% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103225806452 0.0946595960268 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0870967741935 0.0501214627716 174% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0806451612903 0.0437548338989 184% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.0967741935484 0.122226691241 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0354838709677 0.0403226058552 88% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.73133806265 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0354838709677 0.0326793684256 109% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0774193548387 0.0861772015684 90% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0483870967742 0.021408717616 226% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0161290322581 0.011925033212 135% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1687.0 1933.35771543 87% => OK
No of words: 289.0 316.048096192 91% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83737024221 6.12580529183 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20517956788 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.304498269896 0.374742101984 81% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.249134948097 0.28420135186 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.204152249135 0.203846283523 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.138408304498 0.137316102897 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73133806265 2.80594681477 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.037074148 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584775086505 0.56093040696 104% => OK
Word variations: 62.6352671891 60.7387585426 103% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.7743622355 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.079516049 49.517814964 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2352941176 127.492653851 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7743622355 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.529411764706 0.814263465372 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 21.0 4.38877755511 478% => There are something wrong with the essay format.
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 41.9134948097 49.1944974215 85% => OK
Elegance: 0.780701754386 1.69124875643 46% => Essaays need to be developed more elegantly.
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405223914755 0.332605444948 122% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0893428375837 0.102741220458 87% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0947884843921 0.0668466124924 142% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.686612415837 0.534860350844 128% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.262762297304 0.148594505496 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137768641051 0.134430193775 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0779095323104 0.0742795772207 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.0813908834098 0.324371583561 25% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.073305708469 0.0638462369009 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127188655768 0.228012699653 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0750884481767 0.058150111329 129% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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