You are an employee in an office, working on one big project together with your colleagues. Write a letter to your manager to inform him/her that some of the employees make mistakes that affect your work. In your letter say
- What mistakes have you encountered so far?
- Explain that others employees complained about the same mistakes.
- Suggest a solution to solve this problem
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to bring your attention to some issue which we have in relation to our new project.
I am a senior developer, working on Sales software in your organization and I am in charge of other programmers as well. We have recently released the beta version of our new software which tested by unit test department last month. Although all of the errors were solved, a deluge of complaints about this new version was sent. Our Initials review is shown that our colleagues in unit test department did not test the major part of the software that causes all those complaints.
I noticed it seems that was not their first time and other teams have faced with the same problem as well. They told me, to tackle this problem, firstly they spoke with someone who was in charge on that unit and secondly however they try to contact you and share their problem, they did not succeed and their problem still exists.
I think the best solution to solve this matter as soon as possible would a disciplinary meeting with staff and try to stop this malpractice as soon as possible. I would be happy to meet you in person and provide any further explanations on this issue if needed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...it test department last month. Although all of the errors were solved, a deluge of complai...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'i think']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217391304348 0.220444632235 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.173913043478 0.167888034529 104% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0739130434783 0.0606518309736 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0608695652174 0.0506257000042 120% => OK
Pronouns: 0.108695652174 0.118615021944 92% => OK
Prepositions: 0.117391304348 0.107062808482 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0391304347826 0.041066498444 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.41284645495 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0347826086957 0.0385302599488 90% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0913043478261 0.0714148451538 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00869565217391 0.0191574576366 45% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0173913043478 0.00930345855455 187% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1201.0 1141.60824742 105% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.134020619 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.58604651163 5.53046319177 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78085437643 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.26976744186 0.284621296913 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.209302325581 0.211203875043 99% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.125581395349 0.133321485273 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0604651162791 0.0843313296314 72% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41284645495 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576744186047 0.622163163488 93% => OK
Word variations: 55.0508835069 62.8969750728 88% => OK
How many sentences: 9.0 12.9587628866 69% => OK
Sentence length: 23.8888888889 16.4300151701 145% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3028864593 44.7399317507 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.444444444 90.9928171075 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 16.4300151701 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.11111111111 0.613754768223 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 44.819121447 37.5504026743 119% => OK
Elegance: 1.08860759494 1.13073093955 96% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234661854975 0.331212695627 71% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.150414717065 0.0927372745006 162% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0505445569194 0.0736520305886 69% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.657555372083 0.579516596996 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.184590779168 0.180689518051 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103304166409 0.122183219658 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563189899067 0.0765303033291 74% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.154196700661 0.211926503985 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0280748727175 0.0737400523855 38% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1532833557 0.203819188451 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0570303377861 0.067151250289 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.45360824742 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.48453608247 269% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.0206185567 25% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 4.0 4.73195876289 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 1.03092783505 291% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.56701030928 39% => OK
Total topic words: 8.0 8.32989690722 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.