The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
One of the most controversial issues today relates to urbanization and competition. Those words come from globalization.it makes consumer’s change. They haven’t time to enter the social engagement. Present day, People live in a hectic life. But art very important every society. It helps our mind getting relaxed. in this essay I am going to examine both of point of view.
On one side of the argument there are people who argue that the benefits of considerably outweigh its disadvantages. The main reason believing this is that government must investment their money for public service. Public service means a service provide by the government such as schools, hospitals, police service like that’ll services helpful the economic development. I would argue that public investment very helpfully for the society.
On the other hand, it is also possible to make the opposing case.it is often argued that in fact investment for the art. People often have this opinion because investment for the art is very important for the society. Present world, every people living in the hectic life. For example that, people living in a economic monopoly. All are try to earn more money.so they want to relax their mind .a second point is that investment for art motivations society and it shows human culture .A particularly good example here is if government build Theater they can watches film or drama when they have free time.
In conclusion, public service and art are most important for the society. There for government must invest money for public service and fine art.
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- For a long time art has been considered an essential part of all cultures in the world. However, nowadays people’s values have changed, and we tend to consider science, technology and business more important than arts.What do you think are the causes of 84
- The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead.To what extent do you agree with this statement? 73
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'if', 'second', 'so', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'in fact', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.267796610169 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.149152542373 0.155533422707 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.101694915254 0.0946595960268 107% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0406779661017 0.0501214627716 81% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0440677966102 0.0437548338989 101% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118644067797 0.122226691241 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0271186440678 0.0403226058552 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.80867647511 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0203389830508 0.0326793684256 62% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0949152542373 0.0861772015684 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0135593220339 0.021408717616 63% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00677966101695 0.011925033212 57% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1591.0 1933.35771543 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 316.048096192 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.16666666667 6.12580529183 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.348837209302 0.374742101984 93% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.263565891473 0.28420135186 93% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.178294573643 0.203846283523 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116279069767 0.137316102897 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80867647511 2.80594681477 100% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.037074148 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.56093040696 102% => OK
Word variations: 57.5476218442 60.7387585426 95% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0891783567 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.3333333333 20.7743622355 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6116383591 49.517814964 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3888888889 127.492653851 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7743622355 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.555555555556 0.814263465372 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 3.99599198397 175% => OK
Readability: 40.6899224806 49.1944974215 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.76811594203 1.69124875643 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272323911346 0.332605444948 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.128776214378 0.102741220458 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.116453423889 0.0668466124924 174% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.476699395685 0.534860350844 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.178790534408 0.148594505496 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990520520583 0.134430193775 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522588516534 0.0742795772207 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.244641361578 0.324371583561 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0761996177775 0.0638462369009 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183771099493 0.228012699653 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00825094296164 0.058150111329 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.41683366733 176% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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