Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The statement claims that scandals are beneficial to the society, more of an eye opener as they tend to draw common man's attention in a way that no other means seem to do so. Scandals are a way of the present to aware people of the problems and how to deal with it in the near future. Thus, scandals seem to have some benefits to the society. However, scandals which are not related to the society, i.e. scandals involving celebrities and their personal lives might not do good to the major masses as it draws unnecessary attention which ultimately results in nothing.
When a scandal occurs, it is known to anyone and everyone. The underlying dirty deeds of big politicians and billionaires are revealed to the plebeians. For example, the recent bribery scandal in Latin American had enraged the Brazilians and pushed president Dilma Rouseff to the verge of impeachment. A massive scandal at the state oil company Petrobras has badly damaged President Dilma Rousseff and her Workers’ Party, which has been in power 13 years. She had to go through suspension and stood trail. One scandal, and the particular political party or the person is scarred for life.
A scandal is resulted from bunch of many years' problems. A single person is not responsible for a scandal. Although, one particular person will be under the limelight for the same, thanks to our social media. But, we need to understand why these scandals are happening in the first place instead of just talking about it amidst ourselves. Once a scandal is known to us, we need to understand the root cause of it, and collectively work towards the problem so that it never gets repeated in the near future. After all, what is the point behind it, just to seek our, the common man's attention which a mere speaker or an article cannot do.
We can now understand that scandals are useful since they help in focusing our attention more towards the problem and it's solution. However, to work towards those scandal, is also one's responsibility. As it involves a large number of people, a solution cannot be found out unless majority of people are willing to find a solution and comply by the rules. A leader cannot resolve the problem and find permanent solution. Conclusively it can be said that scandals definitely focuses our attention towards the problems but a solution to the problem is found only when attitude of the people is concerned and work towards the problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 158, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this scandal' or 'those scandals'?
Suggestion: this scandal; those scandals
... its solution. However, to work towards those scandal, is also ones responsibility. As it inv...
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Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
... to work towards those scandal, is also ones responsibility. As it involves a large ...
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Line 7, column 217, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...lso ones responsibility. As it involves a large number of people, a solution cannot be found out ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'thus', 'after all', 'for example', 'talking about', 'in the first place']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241970021413 0.240241500013 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.158458244111 0.157235817809 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0706638115632 0.0880659088768 80% => OK
Adverbs: 0.051391862955 0.0497285424764 103% => OK
Pronouns: 0.051391862955 0.0444667217837 116% => OK
Prepositions: 0.100642398287 0.12292977631 82% => OK
Participles: 0.0385438972163 0.0406280797675 95% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64491447165 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0449678800857 0.030933414821 145% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.111349036403 0.0997080785238 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0149892933619 0.0249443105267 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0192719486081 0.0148568991511 130% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2439.0 2732.02544248 89% => OK
No of words: 420.0 452.878318584 93% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80714285714 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52701905584 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.347619047619 0.366273622748 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.271428571429 0.280924506359 97% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.185714285714 0.200843997647 92% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.102380952381 0.132149295362 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64491447165 2.79330140395 95% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 219.290929204 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.48968727796 109% => OK
Word variations: 61.0106682538 55.4138127331 110% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6194690265 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0909090909 23.380412469 82% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8736499928 59.4972553346 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.863636364 141.124799967 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0909090909 23.380412469 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.5 0.674092028746 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.21349557522 58% => OK
Readability: 46.2337662338 51.4728631049 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.45901639344 1.64882698954 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334338202999 0.391690518653 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.121299089876 0.123202303941 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0785198080354 0.077325440228 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.52004185691 0.547984918172 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.150366327254 0.149214159877 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127696728305 0.161403998019 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699958290256 0.0892212321368 78% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.422790996125 0.385218514788 110% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0381122372255 0.0692045440612 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.244140989929 0.275328986314 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407014484982 0.0653680567796 62% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 5.30420353982 283% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 14.0 3.66592920354 382% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.5995575221 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.