As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Technology has been helping the mankind since the Stone age, when early man tried to improvise tools from locally available materials such as stones, wood and iron and the ability of generating fire came into picture. Stone age spanned from 3.4 million years ago till 6000 B.C., the origin of the simplest form of technology. Since then it has been making our lives easier till now. Although, the truth which cannot be avoided that the dependence on technology is increasing day by day, yet we cannot conclude that technology has an adversary effect on human thinking abilities.
The statement is too strong to put the word "detrimental". Technology has reduced the amount of time and energy people used to spend on daily errands. For example, before the invent of telephone, humans used to write mails to communicate to far off kin or their kids studying in a boarding school which used to take ages for the message to reach. After the invention of telephone it is so easy and fast , just dial few numbers and we can talk to our loved ones all because of technology. Technology has hugely impacted human mankind's lives in so many ways that we cannot just put light on what harm technology is doing to us.
Technology has an immense role to play in the field of medicine. It has increased human average life expectancy. With advancement of surgeries , treatments and medicines the life expectancy is still increasing. A recent study shows the average life span for 2004 of a US citizen is 77.4 years old whereas in 1900 it was 48.2 for a male and 51.3 for a female. Another medical advancement which wouldn't have been possible without technology is "cloning". Therapeutic cloning which aims to create embryonic stem cells that could be used to cure diseases or grow replacement organs. This new technology could be used in many areas like burnt victims or cancer patients for the regrowth of cell.
The human mind is responsible for the invent of technology. The thought process which are leading to so many marvelous ideas i.e. new age technology merely cannot deteriorate our ability to think. Rather technology will create new scope to apply our thinking abilities and make our future easier and better. However we should keep in mind that it is important to keep in check the use of technology. For example, we should still manually do the simple calculations such as grocery shopping or the simple estimates which can keep our brains active and not make us forget the high school math.
So, to conclude the write up we can see how technology has helped mankind and still shaping our lives. Together if, we the people can work together with technology and make good use of it , the world surely will be a better place to live in. And as far as the deterioration of human thinking ability goes, we should not enslave ourselves to technology and keep a free flow of thought process which should result in betterment of individual as well as the society.
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'well', 'whereas', 'for example', 'such as', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253968253968 0.240241500013 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.165784832451 0.157235817809 105% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0776014109347 0.0880659088768 88% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0599647266314 0.0497285424764 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.042328042328 0.0444667217837 95% => OK
Prepositions: 0.111111111111 0.12292977631 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0458553791887 0.0406280797675 113% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76137123204 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0352733686067 0.030933414821 114% => OK
Particles: 0.00176366843034 0.0016655270985 106% => OK
Determiners: 0.0723104056437 0.0997080785238 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0282186948854 0.0249443105267 113% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.021164021164 0.0148568991511 142% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2990.0 2732.02544248 109% => OK
No of words: 515.0 452.878318584 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80582524272 6.0361032391 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.58838876751 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.316504854369 0.366273622748 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.231067961165 0.280924506359 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.157281553398 0.200843997647 78% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.112621359223 0.132149295362 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76137123204 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 219.290929204 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528155339806 0.48968727796 108% => OK
Word variations: 64.1487724452 55.4138127331 116% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6194690265 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.6 23.380412469 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5769871163 59.4972553346 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.6 141.124799967 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 23.380412469 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.4 0.674092028746 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.21349557522 173% => OK
Readability: 43.7067961165 51.4728631049 85% => OK
Elegance: 1.53289473684 1.64882698954 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466841059448 0.391690518653 119% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105084066776 0.123202303941 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0599708247876 0.077325440228 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.470638047527 0.547984918172 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.125044355445 0.149214159877 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165984751145 0.161403998019 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769327263247 0.0892212321368 86% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.406602922178 0.385218514788 106% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0738822668293 0.0692045440612 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.327904177848 0.275328986314 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569981438804 0.0653680567796 87% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 10.4325221239 163% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.30420353982 57% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 15.0 7.22455752212 208% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.70907079646 111% => OK
Total topic words: 21.0 13.5995575221 154% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.