law should be flexible enough to take account of various circusmtances , times , and places
here author is concern about very delicate topic that can affect our society in much way so. to be sticked to particular approach is rather diificult and more figurative.
law is some thing that circumscribe us to from doing taht illigal. and still person is doing illigal then he will be punished according to law. flexibilty in law means to allow people to give excuse that either intentionly or in inadvertantly whhy crime is done by them. and if the reason is genuine then to evrease or exonerate people from guilt. but is this sound justifiable.?
there are thousand of crime and abundance of law to punish culprit of their crime. still in evloping countries, rate of crime is not showing any drastical change or decrease. in such condition if we make laws flexible , then instead of expungate of crime, rate of crime will incrase. in republican countries whwre already filthy rich people are missusing some of flexibility, to give flexiblity is like to exacerbate condition. to exemplify in county like india dad by day harassment of girls, rap cases are in per second frequncy.in this crime i dont think there can be any circumtances can that make you importune to do such egregious thing. cime is crinme. what are the circumtances , people should abhore
them.
on the other side gurlf contries whwere there are no such flecxibility regarding to legislation. the rate of crime is so trivial. so it clearly best exemplify that law shold not be flexible to time, place or circumtances. although if there is risk of life or doing crime is for welfare of thousands people, still crime is crime. this statementis totally defensible. there can be certain ways to take out yourself out of mutiny withot law breaking activities.
so in conclusion i would add taht in situation crime is cerime, there must be no flexibility while punishing culprit, because while doing this arbiter i comcern to give judtice to victim.
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'regarding', 'second', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'while', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.263305322129 0.240241500013 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.182072829132 0.157235817809 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0756302521008 0.0880659088768 86% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0616246498599 0.0497285424764 124% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0280112044818 0.0444667217837 63% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12324929972 0.12292977631 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0364145658263 0.0406280797675 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.770586712 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.047619047619 0.030933414821 154% => OK
Particles: 0.00280112044818 0.0016655270985 168% => OK
Determiners: 0.0392156862745 0.0997080785238 39% => Some determiners wanted.
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0252100840336 0.0249443105267 101% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0140056022409 0.0148568991511 94% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1936.0 2732.02544248 71% => OK
No of words: 328.0 452.878318584 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90243902439 6.0361032391 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.58838876751 93% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.326219512195 0.366273622748 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.243902439024 0.280924506359 87% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176829268293 0.200843997647 88% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.131097560976 0.132149295362 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.770586712 2.79330140395 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 219.290929204 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582317073171 0.48968727796 119% => OK
Word variations: 64.9146726309 55.4138127331 117% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6194690265 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.619047619 23.380412469 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4633718668 59.4972553346 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1904761905 141.124799967 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.619047619 23.380412469 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.428571428571 0.674092028746 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.94800884956 101% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.21349557522 575% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 40.0092915215 51.4728631049 78% => OK
Elegance: 1.55670103093 1.64882698954 94% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22516614438 0.391690518653 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0801491792654 0.123202303941 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0715747855959 0.077325440228 93% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.457806525749 0.547984918172 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.217061436337 0.149214159877 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829371987528 0.161403998019 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636569417809 0.0892212321368 71% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.302676301955 0.385218514788 79% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0867023337472 0.0692045440612 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138882051898 0.275328986314 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437821466343 0.0653680567796 67% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.4325221239 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.30420353982 189% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88274336283 102% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 3.66592920354 164% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.70907079646 74% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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