college students should base their choice of field of study on availability of jobs in that field.
Here author is suggesting to take choices of education in college based on availability job in future. alhough it is constructive to bright future but I am not
agree completely.
We all are studying for the purpose of earning in future but to run behind money for the sake of easy lifestyle may not fulfill the true meaning of life. There are
certain example in which people following their own passion have achieved the great success.
The study related to availability of job may give opportunity of job but it will restrict over all development of people. Many people are likely to be most
successful in business field due to their skills, if such people are scared of taking risk or forced to take the choices based on availability of job then it will
be injustice to their skill that can be flourish.
The great and venerated Indian actor amitabh bachan was forced to study the college curriculum but instead he chosen to acting. And he has earned so much money
and respect both that he could not achieved by job .so in life we should follow passion and it will automatically open the doors of earnings if we are skilled.
In practical life there many other example of musician, painter ,and dilettante in other field that they have achieved the money and fame by following the passion.
so in conclusion we can say that our goal should be related to passion in which we can see our bright and not merely related to job purpose.
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...eople. Many people are likely to be most successful in business field due to thei...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'then', 'as for', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.223048327138 0.240241500013 93% => OK
Verbs: 0.182156133829 0.157235817809 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.092936802974 0.0880659088768 106% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0557620817844 0.0497285424764 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0706319702602 0.0444667217837 159% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.130111524164 0.12292977631 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0706319702602 0.0406280797675 174% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.52663726602 2.79330140395 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0446096654275 0.030933414821 144% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0520446096654 0.0997080785238 52% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0408921933086 0.0249443105267 164% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0111524163569 0.0148568991511 75% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1459.0 2732.02544248 53% => OK
No of words: 256.0 452.878318584 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69921875 6.0361032391 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.58838876751 87% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.31640625 0.366273622748 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.23046875 0.280924506359 82% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.12890625 0.200843997647 64% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0859375 0.132149295362 65% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52663726602 2.79330140395 90% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 219.290929204 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52734375 0.48968727796 108% => OK
Word variations: 50.7747418376 55.4138127331 92% => OK
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6194690265 48% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 25.6 23.380412469 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2473833487 59.4972553346 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.9 141.124799967 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 23.380412469 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 0.674092028746 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 10.0 4.94800884956 202% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.21349557522 269% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 48.646875 51.4728631049 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.3734939759 1.64882698954 83% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290788005504 0.391690518653 74% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.145979093695 0.123202303941 118% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0666768251235 0.077325440228 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.794139329635 0.547984918172 145% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.257429821633 0.149214159877 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13377898276 0.161403998019 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873678260349 0.0892212321368 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.150231952832 0.385218514788 39% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0948356849049 0.0692045440612 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135007692625 0.275328986314 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741519962724 0.0653680567796 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.4325221239 48% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.30420353982 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88274336283 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 3.66592920354 82% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.70907079646 37% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 13.5995575221 66% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.