Agree or disagree: It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Working time is controversial topic among all people and companies. Despite of the fact that it is altered though the time and some companies applied different strategy to find best possible working hours, still working hours’ debate is continuing. A plethora of people hold opinion that working day should be limited to three days a week with long hours while other considerable numbers of people favor to have five days work with short hours. Each group provides some reason to support their claim. I disagree with the statement as changing working days might result in reduction of productivity, increasing the risk among the workers and bring about unforeseen result.
The company outcome is directly linked with resources work performance. The more intelligence of resources resulted in high productivity and with better quality. Refreshingly noteworthy conducted study reveals that the performance of workers is changing during the day and particularly at the end of day it is drop sharply. They are recommending for work owners do not over utilize resources continuously which is negatively affected overall worker performance.
Longer hours work might result in safety issue and other unforeseen result among the employees. Working longer hours a day cause the employee become exhausted and brain looses it control over body action. Particularly in some risky and physical jobs, like working in high elevation for longer hours will increase to possibility of occurring incidents. Besides, it is also impact the accuracy of mental activities. The result of work in late hours will not be reliable. Even some times employee is not able to handle office chores and ordinary tasks. What is more, working more hours will impact the worker emotional control. There are multiple events like bad behavior with client, colleagues, and employer and even with family observed because of long hour’s engagement in work.
In a word, I tend disagree with statement despite the fact that there are lot of people in favor of it to have long weekend. It is not only reducing overall company productivity but also provide unforeseen result like safety issue and mental behavior and emotional reaction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 173, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'find the best'.
Suggestion: find the best
...companies applied different strategy to find best possible working hours, still working h...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'controls'?
Suggestion: controls
...ee become exhausted and brain looses it control over body action. Particularly in some ...
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Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'impacted'.
Suggestion: impacted
...ccurring incidents. Besides, it is also impact the accuracy of mental activities. The ...
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Line 5, column 480, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'times'' or 'time's'?
Suggestion: times'; time's
...e hours will not be reliable. Even some times employee is not able to handle office c...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'weekended'.
Suggestion: weekended
...t of people in favor of it to have long weekend. It is not only reducing overall compan...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'but', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'while', 'even so', 'what is more']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.296875 0.229887763892 129% => OK
Verbs: 0.1484375 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.114583333333 0.0866891130778 132% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0416666666667 0.046263068375 90% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0260416666667 0.0685040099705 38% => OK
Prepositions: 0.138020833333 0.118717715034 116% => OK
Participles: 0.0494791666667 0.0351676179071 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.7354796617 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0182291666667 0.0309702414327 59% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0677083333333 0.0887237588012 76% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.015625 0.0209618222197 75% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00520833333333 0.0139019557991 37% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2210.0 2387.08602151 93% => OK
No of words: 350.0 408.028673835 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.31428571429 5.86048508987 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.411428571429 0.338922669872 121% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.3 0.251872472559 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.211428571429 0.174417080927 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.131428571429 0.112833075102 116% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7354796617 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531428571429 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 57.1594190025 59.2087087015 97% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4210526316 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7145182028 48.84282405 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.315789474 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4210526316 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.473684210526 0.644075263715 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 48.4210526316 45.7405998639 106% => OK
Elegance: 2.24096385542 1.45489161554 154% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199807122258 0.300154397459 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.088617527561 0.103427244359 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0710958826138 0.0752933317313 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.466762893938 0.497263757937 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.117355588181 0.151897553556 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752603146304 0.114077575197 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560437952151 0.0781384742642 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.324223530265 0.336927656856 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0331526890997 0.067059652881 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135934834747 0.210909579961 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483167648175 0.0618886996521 78% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.86379928315 129% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.91756272401 81% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 13.6433691756 110% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.