The main benefit of the study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are significantly different from people who lived in earlier times.
People have a tendency to assume that the ones lived in the past had completely different lives than theirselves but history shows the people it is not true. That’s why history is a very important area to study. Otherwise memorizing the previous events does not benefit at all.
First and foremost, the nature of the humankind does not change. However, people think that their nature is superior than the societies lived in the past so that they cannot go through the same things as the previous ones. But if they look at the past and compare it with the presence, they will see much more similarities than the differences. For example, the competition between the countries to become the most powerful is still ongoing like in the times of world wars or cold war. Only difference is that it is not that obvious now until you want to see it is happening.
Once we understand that the people lived in the past is just like us we can use history to take lessons. Let’s consider Hitler, for example, German nation chose him as their leader by democracy but they did not question his actions for a long time and let him to collect more power onto himself which results in the one of the most terrifying memories in the late history.
If history can be read well to understand the causes and effects of the events accurately, we can use it for our lives to not to repeat the same mistakes that our ancestors did.
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- The main benefit of the study of history is to dispel the illusion that people living now are significantly different from people who lived in earlier times. 58
- SuperCorp recently moved its headquarters to Corporateville. The recent surge in the number of homeowners in Corporateville prove that Corporateville is a superior place to live then Middlesburg, the home of SuperCorp’s current headquarters. Moreover, M 50
- The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large 41
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...tory is a very important area to study. Otherwise memorizing the previous events does not...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: SUPERIOR_THAN[1]
Message: The adjective superior is normally used with 'to'.
Suggestion: to
...ple think that their nature is superior than the societies lived in the past so that...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...il you want to see it is happening. Once we understand that the people lived in ...
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Let's consider Hitler, for example, German nation chose him as their leader ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'still', 'well', 'for example']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.198581560284 0.240241500013 83% => OK
Verbs: 0.166666666667 0.157235817809 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0673758865248 0.0880659088768 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0709219858156 0.0497285424764 143% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0815602836879 0.0444667217837 183% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.13829787234 0.12292977631 113% => OK
Participles: 0.0141843971631 0.0406280797675 35% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.4487990293 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.031914893617 0.030933414821 103% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.0016655270985 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.106382978723 0.0997080785238 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0177304964539 0.0249443105267 71% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00709219858156 0.0148568991511 48% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1429.0 2732.02544248 52% => OK
No of words: 255.0 452.878318584 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60392156863 6.0361032391 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.58838876751 87% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.286274509804 0.366273622748 78% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21568627451 0.280924506359 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.149019607843 0.200843997647 74% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0941176470588 0.132149295362 71% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4487990293 2.79330140395 88% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 219.290929204 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564705882353 0.48968727796 115% => OK
Word variations: 56.4580817874 55.4138127331 102% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6194690265 53% => OK
Sentence length: 23.1818181818 23.380412469 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.8022128784 59.4972553346 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.909090909 141.124799967 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 23.380412469 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.818181818182 0.674092028746 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.21349557522 77% => OK
Readability: 44.7504456328 51.4728631049 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.1 1.64882698954 67% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.495352603674 0.391690518653 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.125688260745 0.123202303941 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0620543932869 0.077325440228 80% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.619145198308 0.547984918172 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.191511995683 0.149214159877 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.233812628472 0.161403998019 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873414273699 0.0892212321368 98% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.421003045611 0.385218514788 109% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0601991707674 0.0692045440612 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.345702091368 0.275328986314 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738774971282 0.0653680567796 113% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.4325221239 38% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.30420353982 94% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88274336283 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 7.22455752212 28% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 4.0 3.66592920354 109% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.70907079646 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 13.5995575221 44% => More topic words wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.