Some people think that there are things individuals can do to help prevent global climate change. Others believe that actions of individuals are wasteful and irrelevant and it is only government and large businesses that can make a difference. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Global climate change is a consequence of global warming or we can say continuous increasing temperature of earth. The main cause behind this change is industrialization and changing life style of people. Some people say that individual efforts can contribute to combat climate change, while others reckon that individual efforts cannot bring any change and only government and large businesses can rein in this predicament. According to me, concerted efforts from individuals, corporations and governments are must to deal with this issue.
To begin with, individual’s efforts like to use cycle for short distances, usage of public transport, to use less packaged products and to do car-pooling can really bring a change in the exacerbating condition of environment. Main cause behind climate change is emission of greenhouse gases like carbon dioxide which trap the heat and increase the temperature of planet. Hence, if people curtail the use of private vehicles, which cause air pollution, by using public transport or by car-pool with their colleagues, then it can really add to ameliorate the situation.
On the contrary, other people say that individual efforts can not diminish the air pollution as massive amount of air pollution is caused by large firms which use fossil fuel to produce electricity and do not really use recycled products. Therefore, these organizations need to utilize electricity assiduously and try to switch to renewable energy sources like solar energy and wind energy. Government should enact stringent laws to control fossil fuel usage by organizations. Additionally, authorities should improve the public transport so that people can avoid using personal vehicles.
To conclude, I believe that we all should put collaborate efforts to lessen the concern of global warming. Be it curtailing of private vehicles usage by individuals, switching from fossil fuel to renewable energy sources by big organizations or aforementioned steps by authorities, all are required to get rid of this unfavorable environmental problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 426, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...usinesses can rein in this predicament. According to me, concerted efforts from individuals, co...
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Line 1, column 512, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
...duals, corporations and governments are must to deal with this issue. To begin with,...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'vehicles'' or 'vehicle's'?
Suggestion: vehicles'; vehicle's
...al warming. Be it curtailing of private vehicles usage by individuals, switching from fo...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'hence', 'if', 'really', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'while', 'on the contrary', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.28 0.247107183377 113% => OK
Verbs: 0.177142857143 0.155533422707 114% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0971428571429 0.0946595960268 103% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0285714285714 0.0501214627716 57% => OK
Pronouns: 0.02 0.0437548338989 46% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12 0.122226691241 98% => OK
Participles: 0.0342857142857 0.0403226058552 85% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.15275012648 2.80594681477 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0485714285714 0.0326793684256 149% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.06 0.0861772015684 70% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0342857142857 0.021408717616 160% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00857142857143 0.011925033212 72% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2067.0 1933.35771543 107% => OK
No of words: 316.0 316.048096192 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.54113924051 6.12580529183 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.446202531646 0.374742101984 119% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.316455696203 0.28420135186 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.231012658228 0.203846283523 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.189873417722 0.137316102897 138% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15275012648 2.80594681477 112% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.037074148 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560126582278 0.56093040696 100% => OK
Word variations: 59.9902407716 60.7387585426 99% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 24.3076923077 20.7743622355 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0961252005 49.517814964 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.0 127.492653851 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7743622355 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.769230769231 0.814263465372 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 55.9532619279 49.1944974215 114% => OK
Elegance: 1.92405063291 1.69124875643 114% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352181344608 0.332605444948 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.13031375517 0.102741220458 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0576453572102 0.0668466124924 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.547461837468 0.534860350844 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14171558805 0.148594505496 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141937027713 0.134430193775 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742595822069 0.0742795772207 100% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.348991466884 0.324371583561 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.027703063005 0.0638462369009 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23760730787 0.228012699653 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108223153909 0.058150111329 186% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.68436873747 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.5751503006 78% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 1.9629258517 204% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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