TPO-46
Nowadays people who are successful in their life such as famous athletes or actors are attended by public. Due to their reputation, their opinions and beliefs have attracted a lot of attentions of others in different ages. A debatable question which is often raised regarding this matter is whether the opinions of famous individuals are more important for young people or old people. Personally speaking, I agree with the fact that youth are more eager in ideas of popular men or women rather than elders. In ensuing paragraphs, I will elaborate on my view.
To begin with, it has to be taken into account that humankind is highly motivated to progress and achieve an honorable situation in their lives when they are younger. In fact, in a specific period of time namely from adolescence to adulthood, there are numerous motivations for a person to look around and launch the way to the success. Thus, in the mentioned period, the young are often interested in a famous person like a soccer man, tennis player, and etc. and especially the way that they think in similar ages. I would like to use a personal observation to make clear the point. When I was 16 years old, I was extremely keen to become an actor under the Alacino's influences, a great man actor, and his famous sentence that “everything will be in your hand if you just call it”. I can assert it was even more than a dream to impersonate him but after about four years when I entered the university I totally forgot about my dream!
Although the aforementioned reason is the first one which crosses the mind at the first glance, by no means it is only available. what's more, in the course of time, people's attention to surrounding events and what are happening around them will decrease i.e as much they get older, they care less about marginal issues like other's opinion. Moreover, a teenager worries less about life’s issues, for example, daily chores, compared to an adult. Therefore, he or she is able to spend more time in order to read and learn about their favorite entertainer's beliefs and opinions.
To sum up, celebrities' opinions and totally the way that they think or behave is much more important for the young. There are tremendous opportunities for teenagers from various points of view to follow a successful person's opinion and benefit from it. In my opinion, as we are younger we are more capable to fulfill our dreams by walking in the way of honorable people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 409, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...e or old people. Personally speaking, I agree with the fact that youth are more eager in ideas of popula...
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Line 3, column 191, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...hey are younger. In fact, in a specific period of time namely from adolescence to adulthood, t...
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Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...erson like a soccer man, tennis player, and etc. and especially the way that they think ...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: What&apos
...ance, by no means it is only available. what's more, in the course of time, people&a...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'if', 'look', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'as to', 'for example', 'in fact', 'such as', 'in my opinion', 'to begin with', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211045364892 0.261695866417 81% => OK
Verbs: 0.136094674556 0.158904122519 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10650887574 0.0723426182421 147% => OK
Adverbs: 0.043392504931 0.0435111971325 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0710059171598 0.0277247811725 256% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12426035503 0.128828473217 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0236686390533 0.0370669169778 64% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.88597005724 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0355029585799 0.0208969081088 170% => OK
Particles: 0.00197238658777 0.00154638098197 128% => OK
Determiners: 0.0670611439842 0.128158765124 52% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00986193293886 0.0158828679856 62% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0157790927022 0.0114777025283 137% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2508.0 1645.83664459 152% => OK
No of words: 427.0 271.125827815 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87353629977 6.08160592843 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.04852973271 112% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.332552693208 0.374372842146 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.24355971897 0.287516216867 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.175644028103 0.187439937562 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.121779859485 0.113142543107 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88597005724 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 145.348785872 171% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583138173302 0.539623497131 108% => OK
Word variations: 71.0041003918 53.8517498576 132% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0529801325 146% => OK
Sentence length: 22.4736842105 21.7502111507 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9037752363 49.3711431718 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 132.220823453 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4736842105 21.7502111507 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.842105263158 0.878197800319 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.39072847682 118% => OK
Readability: 46.8296561075 50.5018328374 93% => OK
Elegance: 1.43307086614 1.90840788429 75% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354462041698 0.549887131256 64% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0930263834225 0.142949733639 65% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0584265888593 0.0787303798458 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.47896707177 0.631733273073 76% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.09887005726 0.139662658121 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140512443133 0.266732575781 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501325874937 0.103435571967 48% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.352902271835 0.414875509568 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0568388970729 0.0530846634433 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257337759976 0.40443939384 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333498231442 0.0528353158467 63% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 4.33554083885 346% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.26048565121 47% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 3.49668874172 229% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 3.62251655629 28% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 3.1766004415 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 10.2958057395 87% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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