Agree or Disagree: In order for a business to succeed, it must put more money in advertising.
There are various reasons for become succeed in business; however, the presence of some factors are accounted as of the absolute necessities in the path of prosperity. A plethora of people is in the conviction that investment on advertisement brings accomplishment for the business. Contrary to this popular belief, there are those who argue that drawing the company to waste its money for advertising is not a good approach; hence, there are some elements that manage the business to have consistent growth. I am of the opinion that, advertising has a variety of advantages for the company, and the following explanation will further elaborate on this perspective.
First and foremost, there are some subjects which become an integral part of today’s world. Undoubtedly, branding and popularity is an imperative issue for modern people. Indeed, they have the tendency toward buying the things that are known as the choice, no matter whether it is really the best material that they can have with that amount of money or not. It is where the role of advertisement is raised as the key contribution in order to familiarize public with the product in the first stage and after that promote their customers that this goods or service can be the best thing that anyone could have. Consequently, no one can overlook the extent of importance of ads in this circumstance.
Another vital fact that should be taken into consideration is that the function of promotions is not restricted to conscientious such as when one person watches a TV advertising. In fact, the majority of these commercial programs do not affect to people directly. It means that a person does not know why he opts one product rather than another one, although they are seemingly alike. Therefore, business should utilize these strategies to influence profoundly on their users’ mind. Admittedly, getting the desired result is not as easy as it seems, and requires spending significant amount of money to hire experts. Nonetheless, the business will not achieve to send its message to its intended target in a society.
On the basis of the points mentioned above, I am convinced that advertising is an undeniable segment for each successful business because it helps the company that not only represent the product and the name of it but also unconsciously makes effect on people’s mindset about purchasing their productions. Of course, eliminating the other contributed component will not a wise option as it is the total elements which lead to success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 548, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...after that promote their customers that this goods or service can be the best thing ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'nonetheless', 'really', 'so', 'therefore', 'in fact', 'of course', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233261339093 0.229887763892 101% => OK
Verbs: 0.155507559395 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.060475161987 0.0866891130778 70% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0561555075594 0.046263068375 121% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0410367170626 0.0685040099705 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.131749460043 0.118717715034 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0323974082073 0.0351676179071 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96117422069 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0237580993521 0.0309702414327 77% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.125269978402 0.0887237588012 141% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0194384449244 0.0209618222197 93% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0237580993521 0.0139019557991 171% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2539.0 2387.08602151 106% => OK
No of words: 415.0 408.028673835 102% => OK
Chars per words: 6.11807228916 5.86048508987 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.373493975904 0.338922669872 110% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.29156626506 0.251872472559 116% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.209638554217 0.174417080927 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.142168674699 0.112833075102 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96117422069 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559036144578 0.524397521467 107% => OK
Word variations: 65.4572546214 59.2087087015 111% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6684587814 82% => OK
Sentence length: 24.4117647059 20.5533526081 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1757585676 48.84282405 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.352941176 120.699889404 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4117647059 20.5533526081 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.882352941176 0.644075263715 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.5376344086 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 53.5683912119 45.7405998639 117% => OK
Elegance: 1.57264957265 1.45489161554 108% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172701263289 0.300154397459 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.105920004501 0.103427244359 102% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0872467597905 0.0752933317313 116% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.5349337607 0.497263757937 108% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.182829529311 0.151897553556 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790014564128 0.114077575197 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452908844836 0.0781384742642 58% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.423044821351 0.336927656856 126% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0847678529704 0.067059652881 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12938420904 0.210909579961 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356305288905 0.0618886996521 58% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8870967742 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 8.42114695341 83% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.