The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown in the diagram.
The diagram represents the process of greenhouse gases are produced and how these are trapped from the Sun.
Overall, the primary causes of carbon dioxide emissions are resulting from mankind actions and the process of making pollution is a complex process. The aids of clouds and the Sun restored the greenhouse emissions and trapped the heat within the ground.
The initial greenhouse gases are released from public transportation and these pollution are met with extra carbon dioxide which evacuated from burning power plants by man-made power plants known as burning fossil fuels at factories. The heat will be either remained at outer space or atmosphere as a result of this process.
All these accumulated pollution are stored at atmosphere and some of energy received from the sun is reflected off atmosphere. As a result of this, the greenhouse gases are trapped on earth and tree remaining are absorbing carbon dioxides.
- Motorways help people travel quickly and cover long distances but they also cause problems. What are the problems of motorways and what solutions are there? 73
- The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in a country in 1950 and 2010. 67
- The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. 67
- The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown in the diagram. 61
- The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy. 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this pollution' or 'these pollutions'?
Suggestion: this pollution; these pollutions
...released from public transportation and these pollution are met with extra carbon dioxide which...
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Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n as burning fossil fuels at factories. The heat will be either remained at outer s...
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Discourse Markers used:
['so', 'as a result']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.320754716981 0.268076937826 120% => OK
Verbs: 0.194968553459 0.116061578633 168% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0440251572327 0.0759168565197 58% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0188679245283 0.0366838410393 51% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0 0.0131127313244 0% => Some pronouns wanted.
Prepositions: 0.138364779874 0.155750635184 89% => OK
Participles: 0.100628930818 0.0379272487307 265% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.65598694776 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0 0.0210936926555 0% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0062893081761 0.00175180941692 359% => OK
Determiners: 0.14465408805 0.0948980150116 152% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0062893081761 0.00437022459523 144% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0125786163522 0.00967000014798 130% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 935.0 1161.00487805 81% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.9 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.23333333333 5.90752243213 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73763899035 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.42 0.337110787985 125% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.313333333333 0.247514529752 127% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.206666666667 0.171178102325 121% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.146666666667 0.112407865282 130% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65598694776 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553333333333 0.546246751206 101% => OK
Word variations: 44.8829970234 49.3433353143 91% => OK
How many sentences: 7.0 8.93414634146 78% => OK
Sentence length: 21.4285714286 23.0094962315 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6491995495 42.9750493124 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.571428571 135.714022679 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 23.0094962315 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 0.689975730869 41% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.48048780488 135% => OK
Readability: 52.7619047619 47.7609492067 110% => OK
Elegance: 2.61764705882 2.94281807926 89% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353446250197 0.418131533498 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.154357012454 0.181151798455 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0851309765079 0.0850326197045 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.748397990331 0.706616315825 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.153976995412 0.157042692854 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.213494574808 0.228904883108 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132770186617 0.108899403657 122% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.391978978467 0.367819155151 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.127744219176 0.0812612215331 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277471636366 0.316326947829 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120808289668 0.0921553760075 131% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70731707317 27% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.14146341463 263% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.08536585366 73% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 0.956097560976 314% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 7.1512195122 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.