In the past, people were more interested in improving their neighborhoods than they are today.
As a matter of fact, one of the most important things in a house is its neighborhood. Undoubtedly, people are different these days compare to past. They have new needs and new dreams. In my view, I strongly believe that people in the past were more interested to pay attention to their vicinity.
First and foremost, everybody is busy these days. People have less free time to spend with their families or friends. In the past, people had a simple job and all works were easy to do, but now, each person have to work. Furthermore, if anybody find a free time, he/she would prefer to spend it by new technologies, because last introduced things are really attractive such as smart phones and computers.
Second, job market is competitive nowadays. People have to work hard to survive in a job position. In another word, they do not have much money to spend in their neighborhood. People try to work as hard as they can to provide money for their families. If they get a good money, they will spend it to buy new technologies. In the other hand, people in the past had enough money in their pocket most times, so they were not worry about their future.
Finally, nobody knows about his/her neighbor. For instance, I used to live in a big house back in my home country Iran. I had many neighbors around my house and I knew all of them. We decided to make a group in our area and improve the beauty of our region. Every person had a skill in a major. For example I did a great job in removing leaves in the fall, another guy built a waterfall in the small lake etc. Consequently, we had perfect houses in the past, but after 15 years, most of neighbors are replaced by new owners and nobody are interested to do something for others, because they are not familiar with each other and they tried to make another group as well, but new people are different. They avoided to do something nice for their vicinity, because they believe that they do not know each other and they prefer to spend their free times with their families and friends.
To sum up, although many people live in houses these days, they do not care about their neighborhood that much as past. In addition, they prefer to spend their money in other aspects such as buying a new technology.
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Essay evaluation report
people are different these days compare to past.
people are different these days compared to past.
each person have to work
each person has to work
if anybody find a free time
if anybody finds a free time
so they were not worry
so they will not worry
flaws:
No. of Words: 414 while No. of Different Words: 191
Need to pay attention to the language. Most subjects for sentences are: 'people' or 'they'. Check and read articles online about advanced essay writing.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 20 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 23 15
No. of Words: 414 350
No. of Characters: 1784 1500
No. of Different Words: 191 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.511 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.309 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.281 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 100 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 63 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 41 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 13.794 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.522 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.287 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.473 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.091 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 423, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'worried'.
Suggestion: worried
...eir pocket most times, so they were not worry about their future. Finally, nobody ...
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Line 7, column 480, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the neighbors') or simply say ''most neighbors''.
Suggestion: most of the neighbors; most neighbors
...houses in the past, but after 15 years, most of neighbors are replaced by new owners and nobody a...
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Line 7, column 536, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'nobody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...s are replaced by new owners and nobody are interested to do something for others, ...
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Line 7, column 706, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoided doing'.
Suggestion: avoided doing
...ell, but new people are different. They avoided to do something nice for their vicinity, beca...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'so', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'such as', 'as a matter of fact', 'in my view', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.215982721382 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.153347732181 0.158761421928 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10151187905 0.0866891130778 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0518358531317 0.046263068375 112% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0885529157667 0.0685040099705 129% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.11879049676 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.00863930885529 0.0351676179071 25% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.41968745085 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0453563714903 0.0309702414327 146% => OK
Particles: 0.00215982721382 0.00188951952338 114% => OK
Determiners: 0.0712742980562 0.0887237588012 80% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00647948164147 0.0209618222197 31% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0139019557991 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2262.0 2387.08602151 95% => OK
No of words: 412.0 408.028673835 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49029126214 5.86048508987 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.257281553398 0.338922669872 76% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.167475728155 0.251872472559 66% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.106796116505 0.174417080927 61% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0825242718447 0.112833075102 73% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41968745085 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 212.727598566 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473300970874 0.524397521467 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 51.4164330481 59.2087087015 87% => OK
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6684587814 116% => OK
Sentence length: 17.1666666667 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.4957594279 48.84282405 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.25 120.699889404 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 20.5533526081 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.708333333333 0.644075263715 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 33.9142394822 45.7405998639 74% => OK
Elegance: 1.16911764706 1.45489161554 80% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.379807851482 0.300154397459 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0878592800843 0.103427244359 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0823759118289 0.0752933317313 109% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.45061028809 0.497263757937 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.172636522186 0.151897553556 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134216227476 0.114077575197 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109774848883 0.0781384742642 140% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.359188953681 0.336927656856 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0495605067051 0.067059652881 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.27533432407 0.210909579961 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779593273603 0.0618886996521 126% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.91756272401 163% => OK
Positive topic words: 13.0 8.42114695341 154% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.75985663082 217% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.