Write a letter to the hotel manager to make arrangements for hosting a party for one of your friends. In your letter
– tell the manager about the reason for the party
– explain what requirements you have
– ask about the availability of facilities and the menu
Dear sir,
I’m writing to require about possibility to rent the dining room in your hotel for a very special party. The matter is that, my Ukrainian friend Dmitri wants to celebrate the 10th anniversary of his own enterprise and the dining room is very suitable for this occasion.
The party will be held on the 10th September. As I know, the hotel staff starts working at 8 am, but the meeting is desirable to begin at 9 am. So, I want you take a measures for you employees to come at least by 7 am. Dmitri is ready to pay extra charges for this.
We will need to accommodate 70 people. Everyone should have his own chair and place at the table. Moreover, the enterprise’ management is inclined to invite a local jazz band. That’s why I want to ask you to prepare all equipment (microphones, speakers) and the stage by the 10th September.
Last thing about cuisine. The most part of participants are Ukrainians and they are predominantly not vegetarians. So, I want to be sure that your chef will make variety of dishes with beef and traditional Ukrainian ‘borsh’.
Thank you in advance for considering my request. Look forward to hearing back from you.
Yours faithfully,
Max Eastwood
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 165, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a measure' or simply 'measures'?
Suggestion: a measure; measures
...e to begin at 9 am. So, I want you take a measures for you employees to come at least by 7...
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Line 7, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earing back from you. Yours faithfully, Max Eastwood
^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'look', 'moreover', 'so', 'at least']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.234126984127 0.220444632235 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.162698412698 0.167888034529 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0674603174603 0.0606518309736 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.031746031746 0.0506257000042 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0714285714286 0.118615021944 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0952380952381 0.107062808482 89% => OK
Participles: 0.0238095238095 0.041066498444 58% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.94642685887 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Infinitives: 0.047619047619 0.0385302599488 124% => OK
Particles: 0.00396825396825 0.00132118243153 300% => OK
Determiners: 0.0793650793651 0.0714148451538 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.015873015873 0.0191574576366 83% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00396825396825 0.00930345855455 43% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1218.0 1141.60824742 107% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.134020619 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77251184834 5.53046319177 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78085437643 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.279620853081 0.284621296913 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.222748815166 0.211203875043 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.165876777251 0.133321485273 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.123222748815 0.0843313296314 146% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94642685887 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658767772512 0.622163163488 106% => OK
Word variations: 71.265989719 62.8969750728 113% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 12.9587628866 123% => OK
Sentence length: 13.1875 16.4300151701 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7491431357 44.7399317507 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.125 90.9928171075 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1875 16.4300151701 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.3125 0.613754768223 51% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.09278350515 96% => OK
Readability: 35.4623815166 37.5504026743 94% => OK
Elegance: 1.32835820896 1.13073093955 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.453295282483 0.331212695627 137% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0754849295067 0.0927372745006 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0760682180689 0.0736520305886 103% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.533955688859 0.579516596996 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.162881433917 0.180689518051 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144147373788 0.122183219658 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0888239156175 0.0765303033291 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.217968063314 0.211926503985 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.125722631646 0.0737400523855 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255880883787 0.203819188451 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929454315498 0.067151250289 138% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.45360824742 134% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.48453608247 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.0206185567 149% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 4.73195876289 127% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.