Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
The places for domicile of a person is always a matter of interest , since the urbanization has taken place. there is always a topic of argument to reside between a small home town or big city. I prefer to live in a bog city due a myriad reason.
As a person always wants for carrier development, cities provide a number of opportunities for an ambitious individuals. In a city, having a large number of infrastructure, provide of job vacancies and new, many opportunity for a experience which is useful for a carrier developing candidates. for example: when i was working in a butwal, small city of Nepal, I used to confront a new problem once or twice in month, but while i am working in a kathmandu, Capital of Nepal, I usually confront a new problem everyday, making be more expert my field. in addition to, being a large population, consumption is higher in big cities which leads to higher sales of the product and it leads to high payment of employee, easing to live a luxuries lives.
Secondly, there is lot new things to do in cities so person can do a something new and unexperienced, making a every day as a good day, but life in a small town has always monotous because of limited things within a town. As a big cities have a many fun parks, many recreational clubs, parks which makes to make their holiday worth-full. furthermore, family in big cities can make a activities similar to small-town by going to vacation for a month in a small town but a people living in a small town can't afford to live in a big-city due its high living cost.
third, there are lots of facilities( transportation, communication, electricity)in big cities, making their comfortable. for example: in nepal, population of a smaller village and town are declining for 10 years and growing in cities due a major facilities problem and a government is allocating a for a infrastructure development. During the emergency( heart attack, accident), if a person in a big city are accessible to medical treatment than a small town as lack of specialized doctor, since a country highly skilled manpower are residing in a big cities.
Therefore, being a debate for which pace to abode, I prefer to live in big cities to make my living comfortable due to many facilities, for providing me a handsome payment, opportunity for the development of skills, many recreational activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, while, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 43.0788530466 30% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1966.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72596153846 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01392493338 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487980769231 0.524837075471 93% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0790328343 48.9658058833 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.428571429 100.406767564 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7142857143 20.6045352989 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.64285714286 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.5376344086 433% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229866471571 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091807646604 0.076458572812 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890777780567 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153908653221 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740168790658 0.0645574589148 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 58.1214874552 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.1575268817 144% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.75 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.