tpo 21
The outer states that nowadays, new genetic refinement is appeared which it has some benefits in contrast to natural trees. However, the lecture says that, not only the refined genetic trees have not any advantages but also they can cause to appearing some problems.
First of all, the reading gives some reasons for advantages of modified trees like hardness. According to the outer the natural trees can not survive in various situations and may not be potent in virus infection such as Hawaii plants. In contrast, the lecture stats that the natural trees are more powerful than that refined species. Diversity in kind of natural trees can lead to protect them in different illness. Beside, some modified trees are uniform and it may cause to death of them. .
Additionally, the second reason aforementioned in the reading is that, economical benefits in growing them. By using refined trees, farmers will receive their investment more quickly that that past due to growing so fast. conversely, the professor explicates that the growing facilities for modified trees is high and those products can not sell more expensive than natural trees.
Finally, the reading climes that dominating of wild trees in a plant can be inhibited by using genetically modified trees. Producing the refined trees may lead to distortion of natural trees. modified trees can replace the wood demanding of farmer and being high rate in growing ca mention as an benefit. On the contrast, the lecture explains that, modified trees might actually cause even more damage to the local wild trees. Modified trees grow rapidly and compete with natural trees for neutrinos material like water, sunlight. Thus, natural trees can not survive by crowding modified trees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 494, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...form and it may cause to death of them. . Additionally, the second reason aforem...
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Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
... aforementioned in the reading is that, economical benefits in growing them. By using refi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nefits in growing them. By using refined trees, farmers will receive their invest...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Conversely
... that that past due to growing so fast. conversely, the professor explicates that the grow...
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Suggestion: Modified
...ay lead to distortion of natural trees. modified trees can replace the wood demanding of...
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Message: The proper name in singular (ca) must be used with a third-person verb: 'mentions'.
Suggestion: mentions
...armer and being high rate in growing ca mention as an benefit. On the contrast, the lec...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...eing high rate in growing ca mention as an benefit. On the contrast, the lecture e...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...not survive by crowding modified trees.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, conversely, finally, first, however, if, may, second, so, thus, in contrast, kind of, such as, first of all, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1373.03311258 107% => OK
No of words: 282.0 270.72406181 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1914893617 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48786840353 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 145.348785872 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517730496454 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 419.366225166 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6247065712 49.2860985944 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.5 110.228320801 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06452816374 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.490606178299 0.272083759551 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.188313315782 0.0996497079465 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817026549365 0.0662205650399 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308395576287 0.162205337803 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114420566058 0.0443174109184 258% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 63.6247240618 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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