Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
The life qualification adapted to the time that people live in. I think it is true to claim that life becomes easier and more comfortable in comparison with the past because of some reasons that I will mention.
The first reason is for the betterment of medicine situation in a modern life. The majority of the people died with light diseases. In fact, the lack of the knowledge and requirements drug let the diseases overwhelmed people. Also, another example of the absence of medicine science is dying of baby when they were born. On the contrary, today by the development of science and discovering of new and useful drug the number of the people that die from diseases reduces. So, the first difference of modern life is the advancement of the healthiness condition of people.
Secondly, the emergence of technology is one of the unique altered. Nowadays, the people lives completely depend on the technology such as cars, televisions, the internet, and the others. Each of them eases one part of humans’ lives. For instance, the car assists the people to transfer so readily, or the internet comforts the connection. Therefore, the technology makes a modern life completely unlike from the past because it reduces the problems such as transformation, connection, and the others that are a vital part of people's daily lives.
Finally, increases the job opportunity. Although some people believe that in the past finding a job was easier, by enhancement of education, the people’s knowledge and skills develop and changes the job situation completely different with the past. Factually, the most important part of changing is, arising a new job such engineering or psychology and the others that are results of these two cases that help the people by the passage of time to invent a new job. Hence, by the development of people’s knowledge, the job occasion increases.
In conclusion, an invention; such as technology tools, and detection; such as medicine and new drugs, are the obvious arguments to prove this claim that new and modern life totally changes and makes more uncomplicated and convenience in comparison with our grandfather’s life.
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- TPO-5 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment-doing things they like to do-rather than doing things they should do. 73
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- Tpo 9. Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past.I completely disagree with this claim that nowadays children are less creative than they were in the past. Here you can see my reasons. 73
- Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed. 60
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 389, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ology and the others that are results of these two cases that help the people by ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, it is true, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.0752688172 272% => Less nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 355.0 407.700716846 87% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13521126761 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01468205213 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498591549296 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 14.0 3.08781362007 453% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.7409077361 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.277777778 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7222222222 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 5.45110844103 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129586325055 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0378893021972 0.076458572812 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044114563416 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0806206916951 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051673994944 0.0645574589148 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 11.7677419355 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 10.9000537634 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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