Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. they have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
write a letter to your friends . say thank them for the photos and for the holiday
explain why you did not write earlier and invite them to come and stay with you.
Dear Friends,
Hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing to express my gratitude for the photos and my unforgettable trip as well.
It has been two months since i came back from your place but I miss a lot such great time which I have utilized with all of you. Last week, I saw all photos including which we have clicked in front of London Bridge. Moreover, eating at roadside stalls was great fun too. What is more, I have no words to say thanks for the aforesaid trip and pictures indeed. I am going to miss these days forever.
As you know, I have a busy schedule during these days at the job due to the peak season. That is why I could not drop you a letter. Last but not the least, as Christmas vacation is approaching, let me invite you to my place so that we may relive those moments spent together. I assure you that i will make your trip the most memorable one.
I am eagerly waiting for your reply.
Best Regards,
Harrie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...s well. It has been two months since i came back from your place but I miss a ...
^
Line 7, column 295, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ments spent together. I assure you that i will make your trip the most memorable ...
^
Line 11, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for your reply. Best Regards, Harrie
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, moreover, so, well, you know, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28571428571 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23244672488 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664835164835 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6133332726 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.0 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325167475836 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998755728317 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654778237926 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178581226463 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444138025431 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.01 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.