Do you agree or disagree whit the following statement? Games are as important for adults as they are for children

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 361, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r. Furthermore, even though young people could enjoy their life, they still do no...
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Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'teaches'?
Suggestion: teaches
...is has the utmost importance because it teach us that problems usually get fixed, tha...
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Line 2, column 493, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ing happens to my youngest child, I was no so worry because of the experiences gai...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'obsessed'.
Suggestion: obsessed
...cannot enjoy the present because we are obsess thinking about future. When we are a bi...
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Line 3, column 396, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...aste so much time thinking in tomorrow. for example, when i was an under degree stu...
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Line 3, column 414, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...thinking in tomorrow. for example, when i was an under degree student, I used to ...
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Line 4, column 268, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Older
...ycicle ride or just view the landscape. older people are more aware of this moment an...
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Line 4, column 374, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...njoy life means enjoy this tinny moment everyday.in summary, everybody has the chance of...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, still, as to, for example, in summary, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71358024691 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37893770665 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513580246914 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Interrogative: 5.0 0.994623655914 503% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.1732303985 48.9658058833 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.266666667 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.6045352989 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8666666667 5.45110844103 199% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0698698958956 0.236089414692 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0231930460465 0.076458572812 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269563904206 0.0737576698707 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.044791297646 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151538196909 0.0645574589148 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 11.7677419355 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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