Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Relationship among friends and finding new buddy is a heated controversial issue to almost all people struggling with this problem for long time. I firmly believe that mainting friendship not only is more significant but also is vital for everyone. In what follow, I will aptly substantiate my viewpoint.
First of all,the serious point to be mentioned is that people should preserve their friendship with older friends because they are familiar with each other and know their personality.long term friendship help you decrease your problem with your friend.on the other hand emotional sense between to old friend or group of friends is undeniably and these relationship diminish their difficulties specialy if on of them has depression others can help he/she conquer to this illness.let me explain this issue with tangible example. For instance, your friend did cut his relationship with his girlfriend and he has bad feel. In this regards,you can help him in order to forget his problem by speaking with him and introduce other girl to him in order to make new relationship and certainty you can change your friend feel and play important role for him that a new friend never can do.
finally yet importantly,another significant reason that why i agree with the above statement is the indisputable fact that the worth of friendship increases by time,in other words,a friendship has worth when the period of relationship between two friends expand.The old friend can help you if you have hard problem in your life and you can count on him.Allow me clarify this topic with an instance. For example, you have business and due to some problems you lose your business you become debtor to other people or company. In this condition you can ask from your old and close friends to help you overcome to this bad occurance.
In nutshell,taking all these merits discussed into account we can easily realize the role of old friends in our lief.I am deeply being of the opinion people should keep their long time friendship and no one can deny the significance of old friendships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, for example, for instance, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 346.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99421965318 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86488357303 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537572254335 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.1344086022 169% => OK
Sentence length SD: 145.527866747 48.9658058833 297% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.8 100.406767564 172% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.6 20.6045352989 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9 5.45110844103 200% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.5376344086 271% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271899067612 0.236089414692 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116544136217 0.076458572812 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530893375335 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171022519874 0.150856017488 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556185464146 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 11.7677419355 165% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.43 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.0537634409 155% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.