Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Although many people enjoy eating food at restaurants my preference is to eat at home. The main reason is the place I live in. I am very particular about the taste I want and there is no compromise in that case. Though I was an outside eater in my hometown it all changed when I came to a new place.
To begin with, the place I live in is a small city with very less restaurants of Indian style food and the options are less. And one more main reason is that, the authentic traditional food taste is not acquired here. May be because of the changes in the method of vegetable cultivation, taste of water which is also taken into account while cooking. In light to this, restaurants are quite expensive when compared to home cooked food. Minimum of 20 pounds is required per person. At the same time, the provisional items that are bought for the same rate can feed a family of 4 at least.
Secondly, I am very much concerned about my health and diet conscious. When we cook at home calorie count be maintained. Added to this as everyone knows homemade food is best cooked with great care of washing vegetables neatly and maintaining the hygiene. When the food is cooked by ourselves an extra effort is put to maintain the hygiene and its always healthier. Also when cooked on our own we can cook food as per our taste of choice and requirements of how much ingredients like spice, salt or sugar has to be added.
Most importantly, I am sensitive to the outside food since it upsets my health immediately. Though I am a great lover of street foods, most of the times I avoid it taking into account of my health. Once in blue moon it is good to taste outside food. Even though cooking involves a lot of time, patience and experience it is always the safest option rather than suffering from illness. And it also helps us in managing our time well.
Finally I would like to say that "Food that is good for lips is bad for hips." Taking into account all these home made food is always a healthier and better option to stay fit when we give importance to our health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although many people enjoy eating food at restau...
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Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nd there is no compromise in that case. Though I was an outside eater in my hometown i...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun restaurants is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ace I live in is a small city with very less restaurants of Indian style food and th...
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Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ned about my health and diet conscious. When we cook at home calorie count be mainta...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...n the hygiene and its always healthier. Also when cooked on our own we can cook food...
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...taste of choice and requirements of how much ingredients like spice, salt or sugar h...
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Message: “Once” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...id it taking into account of my health. Once in blue moon it is good to taste outsid...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
... helps us in managing our time well. Finally I would like to say that 'Food tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, as to, at least, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1700.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 384.0 407.700716846 94% => OK
Chars per words: 4.42708333333 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47116618753 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Interrogative: 2.0 0.994623655914 201% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0455119585 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9523809524 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 4.88709677419 225% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187270299827 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0561762593649 0.076458572812 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0950783595244 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110714037664 0.150856017488 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0764082474372 0.0645574589148 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.