Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argued that there is no place for wild animals to exist in the 21st century, so it is pointless to spend money on the protection of these animals. I completely disagree with this view, and analysing animals' role in the nature as well as their benefits to the mankind will show this true.
From my perspective, it is absurd and perhaps arrogant to accept the idea that wild animals have no stands in the 21st century. These animals have always been on Earth since or even before the dawn of human race, and they are an indispensable part of life cycle and Mother nature as a whole. The loss of any species can break various food chains and unbalance the entire eco-system, which is likely to have a negative impact on human lives.
Another big advantages to protecting the wild species is that they can make a positive contribution to the science, especially developing medicines. Many mysteries behind these animals are still undiscovered by scientists, and they may become the key to treat many chronic illnesses in the future. With that idea, the protection of wild animals also means that we are protecting precious knowledges and our own life.
In conclusion, the importance of wild animals to the natural cycles and to the development of new medical treatment are two of the important reasons for the conservation of wildlife, so it is disagreed that there is no point in protecting wild animals because humans have no need for them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1209.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81673306773 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66046577233 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577689243028 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.5381588117 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.333333333 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322982924668 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127866969518 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988949388092 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195218676591 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584567805734 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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