Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people believe that learning a second language makes easier to get jobs and visit foreign countries. However, others think that apart from above advantages, there are other important significant benefits of studying non native languages. This essay will discuss both sides and draw a conclusion.
To begin with, studying overseas languages can exert considerable positive impacts on journey times and also in a work place. To illustrate, bosses and coworkers would be highly impressed if a new worker had a full command over non domestic languages. Because the fresh employee is less likely to cause misunderstandings that would otherwise readily interrupt the normal flow of a work as this type of mistake is being committed commonly by monolinguals. Fortunately, the multilinguals are genuinely considered to be skilful, confident and independent by directors where they open up strong possibilities of getting a promotion. Likewise, visitors may save money and energy during a travel in an alien country since most drivers try to deceive certain tourists by choosing intentionally a long route when they actually could take a short and a quick course. Therefore, mastering a new dialect explains how it might prevent guests being tricked by senseless drivers.
In addition, there has been a considerable strengthening in the memory of binligual people, according to studies. These people tend to use their brains highly because abroad dialects consist of complicated vocabularies and rules. Needless to say, they are compelled to memorise in order to use new words to communications. So, research has shown that multilinguals have excellent long term memory of lists of items whereas monolinguals have poor thoughts.
To conclude, personally, I believe, knowing alien languages proves extremely beneficial both for demonstrating intelligences and finding new works in an overseas.
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Comments
Essay evaluation report
flaws:
The third paragraph should be 'some other reasons why someone should learn a foreign language other than travel and job', while you were talking about the 'benefit of bilingual people'.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 290 350
No. of Characters: 1567 1500
No. of Different Words: 204 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.127 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.403 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.032 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 122 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 47 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.714 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.963 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.291 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.525 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.019 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Dear sir, could you give me
Dear sir, could you give me few examples of some other reasons for third paragraph so that I will write the essay again. I look forward to your reply sir. Thank you sir.
See, the first reason is: 'in
See, the first reason is: 'in order to travel to or work in a foreign country.'
so we can find other reasons like:
people can work remotely without living in a foreign country.
some people (like scientists) learn foreign languages in order to do researches in their own countries.
some people maybe are curios about foreign cultures and learn foreign languages
some for business...
and more...
Dear sir, It is very clear
Dear sir, It is very clear now.Were I able to answer the first reason in my second paragraph sir? Thank you sir.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 682, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'travel'.
Suggestion: travel
...sitors may save money and energy during a travel in an alien country since most drivers ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, likewise, may, second, so, then, therefore, whereas, apart from, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55862068966 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12635987059 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.710344827586 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0936332245 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.142857143 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7142857143 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140289676731 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413194626746 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521203946572 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849203357743 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542994459519 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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