The charts below show the percentage water used for different purposed in six areas of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts illustrate the proportion of water consumed for three aims in 6 countries of the world .
It is clear that the amount of water used for agricultural purposes was highest in each country . By contrast , the water consumption of central asia stood out as the king position with 88%, followed closely by africa and south east asia with exactly 84% and 81% respectively . By contrast, the percentage of water used for home aims in central asia and south east asia were as low as, at about 7%, compared to 19% of south america
With regard to industrial use, the proportion of this purpose accounted for just a haft in Europe's chart. In the same aims, the water consumption of north america was lower, at exactly 48%. Meanwhile , the figure for central asia hit the bottom with 5%, compared to 12% and 7% of africa and south east asia accordingly
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, so, while, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 702.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53330777503 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.69548876 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.0 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 22.9334400587 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155275369982 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911787339983 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639411526761 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127277646069 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0231598070848 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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