A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
⦁ give contact details for when you are away
⦁ give instructions about how to care for your pet
⦁ describe other household duties
Dear joe,
I hope you're doing good. I would like to say thank you to you because when I asked for your help, you didn't give it a second thought in your mind and accepted the responsibility of taking care of my house and pet in my absence. In case, if you run into any kind of issue or difficulty, don't hesitate to give me a call on my mobile number (750-630-8426). If I didn't pick up your phone by anychance, drop me a voice or text message to me and I will get back to you.
Secondly,I would be glad if you could take my pet for a regular walk both in evening and morning. In addition to this, maybe you need to buy some pedigrees from one of the local store and feed him as well about 2 times in day. Furthermore, you might need to schedule the appointment with a veterinary doctor who comes once a week for the routine checkup of dog.
Thirdly, I have two maids coming in on a daily basis in my house, one for cleaning the dishes and latter one for washing clothes and ironing them. Last but not the least if you can give water to the plants and place them in the sunlight during day because that would help them to grow.
I am coming back no later than two weeks until then enjoy and have fun.
Faizal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear joe, I hope youre doing good. I would like to say thank y...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...because when I asked for your help, you didnt give it a second thought in your mind a...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...n into any kind of issue or difficulty, dont hesitate to give me a call on my mobile...
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Line 2, column 358, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... on my mobile number 750-630-8426. If I didnt pick up your phone by anychance, drop m...
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Line 4, column 9, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... and I will get back to you. Secondly,I would be glad if you could take my pet ...
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Line 8, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...wo weeks until then enjoy and have fun. Faizal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 238.0 206.0 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.11344537815 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22538795019 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634453781513 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.7084300812 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 16.8248392259 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 4.34317383033 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271664777066 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979090625372 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0864570592625 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128518920031 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11150334863 0.0580467560999 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.85 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.