Some people prefer to leave their house and see movies in the theater. Others would rather stay at home and watch movies on their TV screen or on a computer. Which one do you prefer?
Every one has their own preferred movie watch place, and all of them have their benefits. Personally I prefer to watch movies at home on TV screen. Because watching movies at home can have a better environment and personal feelings.
To begin with, watching movies at home can have a better environment is because our home is cleaner and you can have more types of snacks and drinks at home. But the worker in theater usually do not have that much time to make the theater hall completely clean, I can always see popcorns sprinkled on the floor, that really makes me feel uncomfortable. Moreover, there just only one type of snacks in theater----popcorns, and few types of unhealthy drinks. And the workers in theater usually do not allow you to take snacks that are not sold in the theater. But at home you can eat whatever you want, like chips and fruit, even have meals during the movie, also drink healthy drinks like tea and juice. In addition, in the theater hall, you only can sit to watch the movie. After a long time sitting in there, my legs will be numb. But at home I can lie down or bend over to watch the movie, and if I keep leave the TV screen a certain distances, my eyes will not get hurt by lie or bend over to watch movie.
Furthermore, I have better personal feelings that watching movies at home is because people at home are less that people in the theater. Therefore we can avoid some trespass like people in the theater would like to talk about movie loudly, even someone who has bad behavior calling during the movie. But at home, there just families even though we talk about the movie. We will not be too noisy like people in the theater. I always watch movies at home, and I often talk to my younger brother what he does not understand during the movie, but we still have a really good time watching the movie, even my brother thinks that I am knowledgeable. I also watch the movie in theater once, with my friend. During the movie I hear many people talking very loudly. I even cannot hear the movie very clearly.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that watch movies at home is better than in the theater, this is because watch movies at home is much more enjoyable that at theater.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...me are less that people in the theater. Therefore we can avoid some trespass like people ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, really, so, still, therefore, even so, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1815.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45945945946 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36152321422 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.439803439803 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 10.0 1.86738351254 536% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.663302172 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.35 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37984798033 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138976507055 0.076458572812 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981124945032 0.0737576698707 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277419965892 0.150856017488 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.079741657551 0.0645574589148 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 11.7677419355 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.34 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 86.8835125448 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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