The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before.
What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest?
The internet has changed the method of information is publicized and used. However, it has produced negative effects which it was not available in the past.
Nowadays, we live in a reveloution technology. Whereas internet has been expanded everywhere in the world. Although internet has been improved our life servic, it was alought brought to us a few problems. For example, in correspondence emails, we mostly receive alot of unwanted and wanted emails. Hence, our time will be wasted for taking a long duration to read all emails. In particular, if someone waits for an email which it is very important to him, he will be judged to read all emails to avoid missing one important message that dropped in one's email box. Furthermore, there is another problem, it could affect on our children. While immatures use internet, they may receive porno graphics photos. As it does not suit their age. Noting, it will create so many problems between their families. Additionally, some people could encounter fraud by internet online shop. As a result, some customers would reveal their secret number's credit card for buying their stuff. So frauds comes out from fake online webs, which it is insecured. Whereas, hackers data protection shows, that most of the banks has been got hacked by unknown people. As banks were led to loss and shut down.
However, there are some solution migh be provided while using internet. Firstly, with regards to porno graphics, when parents use internet in home, they block immoral websites by changing internet setting networks. So that they can guarantee, that websites which children are surfing it are clean and safe alike. Secondly, protecting banks from geeting hacked, bankers should progam their system by downloading the proficeint system software. In addition, they can include such modernized code numbers, which it may help to save them from loss. Finally, online buyers should make double check in online website while doing their shopping. As they could reveal contact information from the page, and check it out before purchasing process. Moreover, online customers should learn about some codes, which it relates to web buying securely. To illustrate, at the top of the page, where you can find a sign that it shows this web which you chose, it is safe for buying. I suggest if someone needs to buy online, it is much better to go shop by yourself. Or, you can get a specific online credit card with certain amount for purchsing an item. For example, if you tend to purchase a stuff with 30 Dollars, you have to keep in your card with the same amount. So, do not use your card which you all your money in it.
To sum up, internet is useful, but it could be harfmul as well. So make always a double check while you use your internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...s, we live in a reveloution technology. Whereas internet has been expanded everywhere i...
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Line 4, column 549, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...g one important message that dropped in ones email box. Furthermore, there is anothe...
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Line 4, column 613, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...ore, there is another problem, it could affect on our children. While immatures use inter...
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Line 4, column 707, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...they may receive porno graphics photos. As it does not suit their age. Noting, it ...
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Line 4, column 976, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'frauds'' or 'fraud's'?
Suggestion: frauds'; fraud's
... credit card for buying their stuff. So frauds comes out from fake online webs, which ...
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Line 6, column 288, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'is'?
Suggestion: is
... websites which children are surfing it are clean and safe alike. Secondly, protect...
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Line 8, column 68, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'make'.
Suggestion: always make
...ul, but it could be harfmul as well. So make always a double check while you use your inter...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in particular, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 56.0 24.0651302605 233% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2311.0 1615.20841683 143% => OK
No of words: 474.0 315.596192385 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87552742616 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4588415268 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 270.0 176.041082164 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569620253165 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Interrogative: 2.0 0.384769539078 520% => Less interrogative sentences wanted.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 2.10420841683 475% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 32.0 16.0721442886 199% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0059060654 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.21875 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8125 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.78125 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168796909168 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431328814982 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406660431677 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106359363314 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193796761661 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.