the charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six area of the world.
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts compare the rate of water used for three different purpose in six regions around the world.
It is clear that water in Europe and North America is used for industry. However, most of the water consumption in four other areas is for agricultural purpose.
The percentage of consumption for agriculture in Central Asia is highest, at 88%, while the figures for Africa and South East Asia are slightly lower, at 84 % and 81% respectively. In addition, 71% of water in South America is consumed for Agriculture, whereas domestic use’s figure in this area stand at 19%. The rate of water used for family in Central Asia and South Asia is the same, at 7%.
Most of the water in Europe and North America is used for Industrial purpose, at 53% and 48% respectively, while these areas have the lower percentage of water usage in comparison with other nations. The proportion of water consumption for industry in Central Asia is lowest, at only 5%, compared to 7% of total water used in Africa.
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- The bar chart below shows the reasons for internet usage among British adults(2001) 89
- International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country visited Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages 83
- New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? 73
- Some people think that in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should make efforts in reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 31
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 334, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed to 7% of total water used in Africa.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 175.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76571428571 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64728829759 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1849221372 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251378597751 0.215688989381 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139326686913 0.103423049105 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669712993972 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193461601842 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066142862836 0.0819641961636 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.