TPO 12 - Jane Austen Portrait
In this set of materials the reading passage provides three reasons to prove that a full-length portrait is Jane Austen's depiction. However, the lecturer finds all the ideas dubious and presents some evidence to refute them all.
First, the author of the reading passage states that the publication of the portrait is done with the permission of Austin's family that identified it as Austin's portrait. In contrast, the lecturer rejects the idea and asserts that the portrait was published 70 years after Jane Austin's death so her family members that authorized the publication may have not seen her in person. Therefore, they cannot clearly and certainly express that the portrait's subject is Jane Austin.
Furthermore, it is mentioned in the reading passage that the depicted portrait looks like Austin's picture drawn by Cassandra, her sister, in most details. On the contrary, the speaker states that the resemblance cannot prove that the sketch is related to Austin since it can be a drawing of any of her family members like her nieces, cousins, or children who were at the same age of the picture and resembled Austin.
Finally, the reading passage links the portrait's style to Ozias Humphrey who was active when Austin was a teenager and states that Austin's family hired him to draw Austin's picture. Conversely, the lecturer declares that the stamp on the back of the canvas reveals that the portrait was painted at least when Austin was 27 years old, not her adolescence.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: OF_ANY_OF[1]
Message: Consider simply using 'of' instead.
Suggestion: of
...ted to Austin since it can be a drawing of any of her family members like her nieces, cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, at least, in contrast, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 246.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04471544715 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53030087141 2.5805825403 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 145.348785872 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536585365854 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 419.366225166 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.6396894172 49.2860985944 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.888888889 110.228320801 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 21.698381199 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1111111111 7.06452816374 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270273403143 0.272083759551 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12092766091 0.0996497079465 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514013425174 0.0662205650399 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162825694747 0.162205337803 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273689158226 0.0443174109184 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.3589403974 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.8541721854 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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