TPO14
In the reading passage, the author calims that thre are three viable explanations for the advantages of applying salvage logging, as a practive in which the dead trees have been conveyed from the areas od forest affected by fire. However, finding all the ideas implausible and questionable, the professor casts doubt on what is presented in text and states that regardless of its seeming() benefits as a method for recovering the forest, this approach casues long-term environmental damages and even its economic benefits are not realistic.
At first, the author argues that falling the dead trees on the bottom of the forest left no space for growing the new plant accoring to this issue that it takes considerable time that trees get decomposed through natural process. Conversely, the lecture brings up the idea that this decomposition provide suitable condition for nutrishing() new vegetation by fetilizing(0 the soil. Indeed, if the dead body remove from the forest, the absence of nutritient in the soil will hinder the next plant generation's growth.
In addition, the reading passage holds the view that presence of some insects render the healthy trees vulnerable. On the contrary, the professor disputes this idea by clarifying the fact that althought this issue is true regarding the trees, these dead trees are proper habitat for other species including birds and jnsects as well that paly a crucial role for establishing long-term healthy forest. Consequently, salvage logging deteriorate() the circumestance.
Finally, the author asserts that industries can take benefits of dead trees to augment() their productivity and decline the unemployement rate. THe professor, thought, dismisses this point by subscribing the point that particularly in severe fire, only a smale segment of trees are usable; hence, its economic benefits will not last for a long time. Moreover, the workforce is not only temporary, but also this process requires apllying the helycopter and other vehicle that are capanle to transfer heavy trees that are so expensive. Besides, it needs individuals who are expert and experienced in this field that should be undoubtedly outsourceed. Therefore, they cannot use local workforce.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, conversely, finally, first, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, in addition, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1868.0 1373.03311258 136% => OK
No of words: 347.0 270.72406181 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38328530259 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.04702891845 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83930856561 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 145.348785872 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605187319885 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 419.366225166 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.3578482534 49.2860985944 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.692307692 110.228320801 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 21.698381199 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6923076923 7.06452816374 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353667356206 0.272083759551 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110318070056 0.0996497079465 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660629504076 0.0662205650399 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204436881033 0.162205337803 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033755997241 0.0443174109184 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.3589403974 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.2367328918 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.11 8.42419426049 120% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 63.6247240618 179% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 10.7273730684 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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