It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job? Do you agree or disagree?
These days, there is a controversial debate among people about the impacts of early marriage. There are a great number of people who interpret the impacts of early marriage with no sufficient job as thoroughly constructive, while others hold an opponent view. I am inclined to believe that youngster should prioritize the good job and their studies before getting married.
There are several reasons why possession of certain occupation is advantageous. First of all, it is argued that establishing sufficient job play a pivotal role in creating adroit people. This is attributed to the fact that such activities could heighten prosperity and well-being. For example, even modern individuals without a good job have to do uphill struggle to life problems.
In addition, it is claimed that some measures can be taken by the government to stimulate young people to boost their professional degree and acquiring job because, without adequate financial means to support their family and themselves, young people might have to live in poverty. This is to say that these privileges could be acquired through sufficient occupation such as marketing and project manager, which would instill a strong feeling of self-esteem in youngsters so that they are more likely to perform up to expectations in their lives and society. Specifically, a research study conducted by Yale University in 2015 has found that high-level degree could enhance a person’s intellectual ability to make decisions related to social and personal life.
In conclusion, the foregoing discussion propounds the view that adequate income enhances the efficiency and effectiveness of youngster s’ evaluation and increases his confidence. It is expected that families take cognizance of these facts and begin to adopt this way of assessment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, still, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 5.94088669951 185% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 31.9359605911 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1207.87684729 127% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4609929078 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03191281987 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 139.433497537 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641843971631 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 379.143842365 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.325123152709 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0462807752 50.4703680194 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.333333333 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11326869551 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0417404555605 0.0925447433944 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705993753158 0.071462118173 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0648876631371 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555363225077 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 53.1260098522 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.