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The article claims that marine mammals their name is seller’s sea cow were extinct and the article provides three theories to support the claim. However, the professor explains that we do not know the exact reason of the extinction. The professor also refutes each of the theory has a problem.
First, the reading states that over hunting of the sea cow is the main cause of their decline. The author of the reading mentions that the Siberian people found the sea cow as a good sources of food during harsh environment, so they started to over hunted, which lead to the extinction of the sea cow. The professor refutes this point by saying that the sea cow has a massive weight and it is about nine meter long. The professor argues that a couple of sea cow will feed the Siberian population for a month, so the Siberians were in no need to over hunt the sea cow.
Second the article claims that the disturbance in the ecosystem cause decline in the sea cow population. The kelp which is the main sources of food for the sea cow decreased due to the disturbance in the ecosystem which leads to decline in the sea cow population. However, the professor refutes this point he mentions that there was no experience of food shortage at that time. The professor argues that if the disturbance in the ecosystem occurred at that time it will not only cause decrease in the kelp population but also will cause decrease in the whale’s population, and there were any report in whales decline.
Third, the reading avers that European fur trader is one of the main causes in the extinction of the sea cow population, last cow caught by them on 1768. Yet, the lecture disagrees. It claims that the numbers of the sea cow were already low before the arrival of the European. The professor also mentions that soon after the arrival of the European the sea cow extinct. Till now the main cause of the sea cow extinction is unknown.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s each of the theory has a problem. First, the reading states that over hunt...
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Line 3, column 408, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'meter' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'meters'.
Suggestion: meters
...s a massive weight and it is about nine meter long. The professor argues that a coupl...
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Line 3, column 420, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...weight and it is about nine meter long. The professor argues that a couple of sea c...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... need to over hunt the sea cow. Second the article claims that the distu...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...were any report in whales decline. Third, the reading avers that European f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.01324503311 299% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1598.0 1373.03311258 116% => OK
No of words: 344.0 270.72406181 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64534883721 5.08290768461 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47862004516 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.418604651163 0.540411800872 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 419.366225166 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.116997792494 0% => OK
Article: 13.0 8.23620309051 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 21.2450331126 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8538241446 49.2860985944 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.875 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 21.698381199 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06452816374 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 4.33554083885 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.52650764006 0.272083759551 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.209731618711 0.0996497079465 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132706265678 0.0662205650399 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.343625291097 0.162205337803 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125676319309 0.0443174109184 284% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 53.8541721854 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.2367328918 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 63.6247240618 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.498013245 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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